A man with only enough memory to recognize his new body is not his own is thrust into a new world with more power than he ever believes he wanted. He will need to get use to his new body, new customs, and new abilities as Fecto Elfilis.
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Thank you, I hope you enjoy.
If you'd like to borrow an OC, let me know via PM.
If I want to in the future, how do I add my stories to group folders? I can't seem to figure it out. Or feel free to do it yourselves I'm not your real dad.
he made a kirby? can he make a luna too? prefreably a smaller one for kirby to be frinds with
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Spoliers
Oh My Glob he portaled Kirby.
Btw I don't think your overdoing the nudity, I think it's funny and not a topic most authors would think to cover.
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Can you specify what you mean by uninvited?
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Sure. The word held no negative implication in this context. What I was trying to say is that, although laugh-inducing, the sexual jokes were not foreshadowed except for that there was a warning tag in the description. You, the author, did not invite the jokes into the story. Instead, you threw them in, and the jokes, at the very least, bumped into me harder than what I think jokes should. Thus, the first half of the comment in question. Basically, it's not the sexual jokes that I didn't like, but how the storytelling seemed not to have necessitated them.
Aside from that, I'm enjoying this story very much so far. An upvote to your hard work.
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I see what you mean, but I think I'm saving subtlety and build up for relationships, and I'm not sure I can think of a slow way to introduce them anyway that doesn't make them lose their impact. I hope you continue to enjoy the story regardless though. Thank you for humoring me.
is this kirby gonna disappear after a while or are they gonna be permanent also are they the real kirby or are they like a clone of it?
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You'll have to read to find out
I'm wondering if any of them are gonna set their eyes on Elfilis... I mean they're massively open about it so far
Well that was amusing.
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aw ok you're just lucky that the story is good ;-;
Congratulations Elefin, youre a Mama.
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Vaya se me hace Raro encontrar a alguien que sepa hablar español. aqui todo mundo usa Ingles
Kirby + Pinkie = We doom
Discord: I am glad my prison hasn't broken yet.
Nah. Its fine. Makes a good running gag.
*Insert every scream emoji in existence*
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Discord is probably reinforcing his prison just to avoid the crossfire.
Screaming, "Put it back! Put it back quick before it devours the world!"
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Discord probablemente habrá dejado hueca su estatua y tratado de escapar al Multiverso
Every time I read the title of this story I just hear this clip from goddamn hero factory episode 1
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=p8MKx1yPjzU&feature=youtu.be&t=186
…The ending of this chapter made me lose it.
Kirby is too precious, please nerf.
Whispers: Poyo
I think your doing fine with the nudity. Also loving the story.
I was going to ask if the main character could create a tantabus-like Dark Matter but that ending confirms it. He creates a ball of Dark Matter full of positivity (Kirby origin theory)
Also I imagine his nightmares can become reality too... scary