A man with only enough memory to recognize his new body is not his own is thrust into a new world with more power than he ever believes he wanted. He will need to get use to his new body, new customs, and new abilities as Fecto Elfilis.
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i hope he goes back and informes danny and ben what was going on after him and the voice stop whatever is going on with them
.... Did he seriously just take himself out?
Ok then
Really hope Elfilis recovers in time to sort things out and get back to Samuel Oak. The Professor doesnt have much time?
Oh dear, computational conflict. So many robots get dropped by the requirements to sample fast enough to get a coherent return in signal quality and the ground just keeps rezzing more detail than it can handle.
Still curious who the heck is taking a ride in Elfilis' head this time?
This shit is getting so convoluted and needlessly random, it is legitimately giving me a migraine from reading it.
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ima be honest, i just skimmed this chapter and still got a headache
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Yeah...
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don't listen to them, the crossovers are nice
especially since they're all generally cogently written
you're doing kinda like Magolor in this chapter and managing to perfectly juggle several rather disparate things and make all of them work in your favor
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its glorys
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Its a good story, i just think some people cant handle having to pay attention to three different story arcs all at once.
Im glad that you guys are still enjoying the story, thank you. Things are still going to calm down soon though. More grounded in equestria and less multi-chapter action and fight scenes. Not forever, but Elfilis is going to be spending time building character instead of battle scars.
I would like to say I do like the crossover stuff, and the author is not obligated to write what we want. The author should enjoy what they write and want to share it, if you don't like it you are not obligated to stay. (For example I want Cakeflanks action too, but I'm not complaining about it.)
I do think that the author did a good job on the backstory for people who don't know anything about Kirby too.
I wonder if the whole ship went boom?
The characters need some time to rest