A man with only enough memory to recognize his new body is not his own is thrust into a new world with more power than he ever believes he wanted. He will need to get use to his new body, new customs, and new abilities as Fecto Elfilis.
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I almost died reading this chapter!
I like Rump Pumper
Calling it now. All the Mare Six will be after Star Vision.
I am grinng now because of this chapter, thank you.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Thanks for chapter!
I think it has to do with survival instincts? To ensure that after surviving a near death experience something of yourself lives on should something like it happen again with more lethal results?
Idk am not that knowledgeable within biology and psychology…
Have a good day!
At least it isnt one of the many battle mate options suggested for dragons. Especially if Spike verses the Giant fire breathing cockatrice from the comics is true with week regeneration of removed eye.![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
Then again, just how much regneration did Spike need while younger to survive even Twilights indirect experiments? good thing she never got into Science of Spike.![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
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Somewhere recently I saw something to the effect of "Spike never really needed much looking after as a hatchling. His sheer durability solved most problems for him, up to and including, casually tanking falling bookshelves as a toddler."
This happens way too often in this story, where at the start of the chapter the reader is just kind of thrown out with no context to the present situation. There should be like a (POV)____ thing at least.
Also starting with the perspective of a new character who's shortened name could be in reference to multiple other characters, and who isn't introduced properly until the fifth paragraph. Bad
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Yes, Starswirl and Star Vision. But Starswirl will always be fully said. If you went directly from the end of the last chapter to the beginning of this one, it would be obvious who it is, but obviously im on Fimfiction writing in 2000-3000 word portions. And I also state his relationship to the Elements in the first paragraph. The five ponies he had in cages while he was Discord and the one who got away. A new reader will not have to wait a week to get to this part and will be able to make the connection easier.
Also, I really dont want to start every chapter with: "Twilight this- I that- Luna wondered- etc."
Edit: Just re-read the first paragraph about five times. I see it now.
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but tanking them like a Ditto, Slime, goo, Gel etc?
Or tanking them like Susan from Monsters verses Aliens. Gets turned to paint by a meteorite then a power ball, and the fluid reforms her near indestructible?
Then again, Spike undergoes Moult similar to how a Caterpillar turns into a butterfly, so maybe Dragons have that stone outside to contain the delicious liquid gooey inside while they rebuild and why so many large enemies really love Second Egg?![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Wait... that can't be right. He is a son of a pony and a dragon, so he is not in anyway Pure Kirin. That would be Autumn Blaze and her peers.
Yeeeaaa...people who almost die are like that cause qhen you and your body realize you where very close to death at some point your body says "oh shit! We almost died! We need to make sure our DNA moves on very quickly!" And then hormones act up big time to get you to go fuck so your part of your family line does not end with you
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Yeah, im pretty sure i wrote the inverse of what would happen in real life. But my idea is that the further down the bloodline you go without a pony or a dragon, the more things go wonky for kirin.
Ahh yes the age old fornication by combat. Never fails unless your MC is denser than lead. As such I conclude that Elfilis is denser than a neutron star
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Pure vibranium.
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At least he is not as dense as a singularity.
This shit is hilarious
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Easy way to explain it is the gifts a unicorn and dragon are naturally blessed with become watered down with each Kirin generation to make room for the Kirins own talents.
So less unicorn magic and dragon fire with each successive generation. The current generation probally cant do either. That sound about right?