A man with only enough memory to recognize his new body is not his own is thrust into a new world with more power than he ever believes he wanted. He will need to get use to his new body, new customs, and new abilities as Fecto Elfilis.
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Hot damn, he's calling in the BIG Guns
Oh boy, this might actually be the real Galacta Knight, Elfilis summoned. Or at least his consciousness, since I'm pretty sure him being devoured by Morpho Knight in Star Allies was cannon.
Saitama IS a bit overpowered for such a confined location. And Crusader is a bit on teh large side, although his Hyperspeed ability would greatly assist in tracking and targeting?
Then again, Kirbyverse only. Lots of details there Ive never even heard of, never mind seen.
GALACTIC KNIGHT HAS JOINED THE FIGHT!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
I forgot he could only do Kirby character and thought for a moment he was gonna say:
DETERMINATION
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Yeah, Determination was considered. Coming up with descriptors has been a surprisely fun part of writing this.
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All gas engines are explosive powered. Just, really tiny continuos explosions.
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Uhhh bueno, sabia eso, pero no lo pensé en el momento, y considerando lo grande y caro (respecto a los recursos, no existe el dinero alli) que es el motor, pienso que utiliza explosiones de mayor potencia para funcionar
Recién acabo de darme cuenta de que fue el último capitulo... igual, me gustó bastante, ya quiero ver como le parten la madre a Chrisy... ademas, la batalla entre Elfys y discord será legendaria o tendrá que ser censurada por lo extremas que serán sus habilidades? Solo digo, el caos es una potencia a gran escala, pero el poder de la imaginación en los sueños sigue siendo también una potencia a gran escala
Dang talk about overkill! I don’t think we have reached the level of escalation where HE is required to be summoned. Though I think it is a nice touch that he is so powerful that his will was transplanted into his Phantom Copy. If it weren’t for that and it was a separate mind on to it’s own, then I would have suggested renaming him Nebula Knight. Since it’s both as colorful as phantoms and is a intergalactic phenomena. Regardless given his past track record he most likely do more collateral harm, just leave since it’s canon that he hates being ordered around and forced to fight for or against others, or asked to be sealed away and be left alone. Unless they appeal his former heroic Aeon Hero self. However that is a big ask given he clearly has trust issues due to the aforementioned betrayal, constant sealing, or imprisoning. Well he still better choice than a certain Butterfly. That would help no one.
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No creo que la traducción del inglés al español fuera un problema, usualmente lo único que afecta la traducción son los chistes con referencias, las músicas y los poemas, además de que algún que otro párrafo tenga alguna línea en bucle o que dicha línea falte en la traducción
Supongo que los chistes tocaron una parte incomoda de mi, tal vez algo con las relaciones entre parejas o algo así, no sabría explicarme ya que aún no conozco todo sobre mi
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That is fair
Might not get a chapter out this week. It's been rough. Hopefully we'll all be pleasantly surprised as Sunday comes around. Still trucking though, I'm not out of gas for awhile yet.
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My intent wasn't to trick anybody, but I understand that I seemed to have swerved directions. Truthfully, Luna wasn't going to be a love interest at any point, but I very much wanted them to have chemistry and a relationship based on perceived similarities. I appreciate the feedback though, as this is still my first story. Something to keep in mind for the future.
I'm surprised he didn't summon morpho knight