The villains have defeated and conquered Equestria, the heroes lost, and the world fell into chaos. In the midst of it all, an old mare tries to live a quiet life, but nopony can run from their past forever.
I've found myself drawn to this fic for a variety of reasons. I would recommend two things first off: Get some form of cover art, and also someone to help edit your stories. I noted some awkward dialogue, descriptions, and minor spelling mistakes. Besides that, though, I am very curious to see where this goes. Be it my love for alt universe adventures, finally seeing a mature fic in this category, or the fact that I wish to see you succeed with this. I hope it works to cure your writer's block, and you can find success with this. Oh, also spread this around in various groups that are relevant, of course!
To offer my support, i'll do what I can and give a positive rating for now, and track this fic. I hope things work out and you improve more. I wish you good fortune on your fic-writing journey.
As for the story itself, I find the characterization of Celly as a grumpy old mare who had her old life trampled on and doesn't take diddly-squat from the new creatures ruling her land to be a very intriguing premise.
11284720 Thank you very much. I would like a cover, but the one that made me the Batmane one is not available, and the editor thing, I tried to find it back in the day, but everyone I contacted ignored me or didn't connect to Fimfiction for years, I'm sorry for the mistakes, I do my best.
I too hope this will cure my writer's block. This story has been stored in my head since before Batmane.
And about Celly, believe me, you haven't seen anything about how grumpy she is now .
I like the idea of this story, And the writing is fairly enjoyable. Celestia is properly grumpy and I love it. A lack of love provides an interesting plot beat. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
11285254 Thank you! This is an idea that I was also passionate about writing, especially after reading stories like Spider-man Reign or The Last Ronin, the idea of a Celestia without her characteristic kindness and compassion in a decadent Equestria is something I wanted to write.
This is interesting. If you'd like, I could let you borrow an OC. Just contact me via PM if you'd like the details.
I've found myself drawn to this fic for a variety of reasons. I would recommend two things first off: Get some form of cover art, and also someone to help edit your stories. I noted some awkward dialogue, descriptions, and minor spelling mistakes. Besides that, though, I am very curious to see where this goes. Be it my love for alt universe adventures, finally seeing a mature fic in this category, or the fact that I wish to see you succeed with this. I hope it works to cure your writer's block, and you can find success with this. Oh, also spread this around in various groups that are relevant, of course!
To offer my support, i'll do what I can and give a positive rating for now, and track this fic. I hope things work out and you improve more. I wish you good fortune on your fic-writing journey.
As for the story itself, I find the characterization of Celly as a grumpy old mare who had her old life trampled on and doesn't take diddly-squat from the new creatures ruling her land to be a very intriguing premise.
Hmmm, very interesting, I'm eager to see where this goes. You get a thumbs up and I'm tracking this.
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Thank you very much. I would like a cover, but the one that made me the Batmane one is not available, and the editor thing, I tried to find it back in the day, but everyone I contacted ignored me or didn't connect to Fimfiction for years, I'm sorry for the mistakes, I do my best.
I too hope this will cure my writer's block. This story has been stored in my head since before Batmane.
And about Celly, believe me, you haven't seen anything about how grumpy she is now .
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
I like the idea of this story, And the writing is fairly enjoyable. Celestia is properly grumpy and I love it. A lack of love provides an interesting plot beat. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
11285254
Thank you! This is an idea that I was also passionate about writing, especially after reading stories like Spider-man Reign or The Last Ronin, the idea of a Celestia without her characteristic kindness and compassion in a decadent Equestria is something I wanted to write.
Okay, I like this. Please continue the story.
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I'm glad you like it . And of course I will continue this, I have a lot to tell.
Interesting idea. You got me hooked right on the first chapter. I can't wait to see how this progresses. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you!
Well then consider me interested.
This raises so many questions I look forward to seeing the answers too qnd I can't wait for further updates.
Also ended up giving me story ideas which I always enjoy.
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I'm glad you like it.