Ah the cake mentioned here made by Blueberry Spark where I am from is called a Chocolate on Chocolate Hate Crime a Very tasty cake if I may say so myself.
Hmmm like the idea however I’d appreciate a time frame marked at the top of the chapter or something along the lines. Was fairly confused trying to figure out when this happened.
11242526 If ya do perhaps put it at the top. Rather know before I start reading then learn after I’ve read and thus questioning along the whole chapter. At least for the cannon chapters for the non cannon don’t need no time frame really since they aren’t really ‘apart’ of the story.
I like this a lot. Side stories are a great way of world building and character development. I really want to see chapters about their movie nights together, especially the ones when they watched Star Wars, Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings.
11241944 Their consciousness will yelling at them for awhile about badly they messed up and knowing just how lucky the princesses decided to show mercy to them will stay with them for a long time. Sometimes one own voice is the greatest punishment that anyone can ever receive.
Surprisingly, it was Luna who spoke first. “What giveth thou the right to decide who is worthy of life and who isn’t? We don’t care if thou art the Bearers of the Elements now. Nopony is above the law, not even our royal sister and ourselves.”
Tell that to tyrannical characters, even yourselves from different alternate timelines/worlds/universes.
Oh, and NEVER mentioned this to the Emperor of Mankind of all beings. He is definitely above his own "laws".
As for Jethro in this chapter? I feel mixed with him forgiving them so callously. I understand the reasons. But I ain't too forgiving on ponies/people that tried to take my own frickin life for stupid racist/xenophobic reasons.
So this happen right between chapter 9 and 10? So what happens to AJ and the others besides getting a slapped to the wrist?
Ah the cake mentioned here made by Blueberry Spark where I am from is called a Chocolate on Chocolate Hate Crime a Very tasty cake if I may say so myself.
Write movie night reactions. Since we know egghead watched Harry Potter, what do everyone else thought or what other movies they seen?
The emotional rollercoaster in this chapter is really intense.
you cant put too much on your plate dude, anyway;
keep it up!!!~
this is a great chapter
Nice job. Have to say I wasn't to sure about the whole side story thing but this has my interest.
Hmmm like the idea however I’d appreciate a time frame marked at the top of the chapter or something along the lines. Was fairly confused trying to figure out when this happened.
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I'll add an Author's Note in a bit.
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If ya do perhaps put it at the top. Rather know before I start reading then learn after I’ve read and thus questioning along the whole chapter. At least for the cannon chapters for the non cannon don’t need no time frame really since they aren’t really ‘apart’ of the story.
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That is the plan, yeah.
I like this a lot. Side stories are a great way of world building and character development. I really want to see chapters about their movie nights together, especially the ones when they watched Star Wars, Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings.
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Their consciousness will yelling at them for awhile about badly they messed up and knowing just how lucky the princesses decided to show mercy to them will stay with them for a long time. Sometimes one own voice is the greatest punishment that anyone can ever receive.
Roll up a newspaper.
Apply to Applejack's nose.
Debt repaid.
"Jethro" still doesn't sound like a real name to me, regardless of how many times I've seen it
It sounds like someone got punched while saying "Seth", lol
Tell that to tyrannical characters, even yourselves from different alternate timelines/worlds/universes.
Oh, and NEVER mentioned this to the Emperor of Mankind of all beings. He is definitely above his own "laws".
As for Jethro in this chapter? I feel mixed with him forgiving them so callously. I understand the reasons. But I ain't too forgiving on ponies/people that tried to take my own frickin life for stupid racist/xenophobic reasons.
I am very hard to forgive, alright.