You warning against sexual content and then having a wrestling match with Braeburn being the first scene got me expecting this to go in a bit of a different direction. But hey, it IS Braeburn, so I figured it made sense.
This was very sweet! I can see why you said it would make for a good offshoot story, it is a good premise and you write it well.
Personally I do hope that he stops the argument before it almost becomes war in the main story considering applejack was way too stubborn then she didn't even want to consider the Buffalo point of view and because of that she helped almost cause a war.
11273478 Maybe here, maybe in the main story, maybe both. I mean, we did catch a glimpse when Jethro showed Twilight the various MLP Gens, and when he sang the G3 theme song. And we all know Diane is an MLP fan. Albeit up to G3.
good chapter
was hoping for a what if or semi canon of Twilight vs the Staticnet
You warning against sexual content and then having a wrestling match with Braeburn being the first scene got me expecting this to go in a bit of a different direction. But hey, it IS Braeburn, so I figured it made sense.
This was very sweet! I can see why you said it would make for a good offshoot story, it is a good premise and you write it well.
Personally I do hope that he stops the argument before it almost becomes war in the main story considering applejack was way too stubborn then she didn't even want to consider the Buffalo point of view and because of that she helped almost cause a war.
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The events of Over The Barrel already happened in the main story actually.
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I thought that wasn't till later. Of course with some things being out of order it hard to keep track.
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It happened when Jethro got his “slave”.
Well if he went then you have to write about it.
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He didn’t go actually. He had to stay behind.
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Ahh and I wanted him to make peace faster than before maybe even find out if this had politics mixed in.
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If I decide to make a spin-off story based off of the Appleloosa universe I’ll show it.
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are you going to show us how they react to the brony fandom? XD
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Maybe here, maybe in the main story, maybe both. I mean, we did catch a glimpse when Jethro showed Twilight the various MLP Gens, and when he sang the G3 theme song. And we all know Diane is an MLP fan. Albeit up to G3.
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true. Heh, can't wait to see Sunset's reaction to Equestria Girls "Am i supposed to look like that? I do like the jacket though"
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I do think she was wearing a leather jacket when she came through the Stargate the first time. That bacon haired girl. Hehe.
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It isn't sunset without her signature black jacket.
Interesting but still like the "what if" of him appearing before Nightmare Moon ALOT more.
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Well technically he did he just didn't realize that he was in another world at the time.
You should make it in to a story