A neat little story, though I'd offer you a tip or two. One, whenever you get the urge to write he did x, describe him doing that. Or he felt y, describe him experiencing that emotion. You do alot of "This happened, then this happened, then this happened." Try to create a narrative through line for it all.
Nate becomes a man out of time again and just goes off. With how werid the fallout world is im not supprised that it became equestria. Im hoping there is something left of nates world and he becomes a good leader
Ayy, you're doing a similar playthrough to what I did. Sided with minutemen, wearing power armor all the time. Only difference is that I exclusively use the Automatic Laser Musket. Full on "Tally-Hoooooo!" haha. Definitely interested in seeing where this goes.
Great story but i don't like anthro didn't know it was until part way thank anyways
Ooh I’m really liking where this is going
Pretty good first chapter hope you continue story not a game anymore
The Council shall observe your career with great interest.
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!!! THE SKULLS OF THE CHANGELINGS WILL GREATLY PLEASE KHORNE!!!!
A neat little story, though I'd offer you a tip or two. One, whenever you get the urge to write he did x, describe him doing that. Or he felt y, describe him experiencing that emotion. You do alot of "This happened, then this happened, then this happened." Try to create a narrative through line for it all.
This chapter was bad ass... I just finished a replay of the game and I'm so stoked to read more of this
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I may ask for your assistance, come the next chapter. If you don’t mind?
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Of course. I don't mind lending a hand and fight scenes are my favorite.
At first I thought that was a picture of a Space Marine, then I realized that the shoulder pads were way too tiny.
Nate becomes a man out of time again and just goes off. With how werid the fallout world is im not supprised that it became equestria. Im hoping there is something left of nates world and he becomes a good leader
That's a lot of raw meat in that tag salad.
Ayy, you're doing a similar playthrough to what I did. Sided with minutemen, wearing power armor all the time. Only difference is that I exclusively use the Automatic Laser Musket. Full on "Tally-Hoooooo!" haha. Definitely interested in seeing where this goes.
The story was spot-on keep up the good work
Please continue it's great
Can’t wait for more of this, tho I hope he regains some more control as he is being a bit of a dick when he doesn’t need to be.
Each time I read this I like it that little bit more
Two songs that would go well with this rampage
Left 4 dead/2 Tank theme
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The Only Thing They Fear Is You