She appeared as if from nowhere, a dark shadowed figure full of dread magic. Shining Armor and Cadance scowled with apprehension, but her attention was on the _other_ shadowy overlord that stood before her. Only one could remain.
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Good chapter. Though you switch to calling Shining "Steel", unless there was another pony there I didn't see.
Wait, so Thorax arrived before the Royal Crystalling? Is the connection between Cadance, Shining, and Umbra through the Crystal Heart that much of a love beacon in its own right?
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Fixed!
Come on Spike! There’s a Thorax needs saving.
Adorable, and misspelled.
Insistant. Insistent? "He insisted."
Edit: Ninja'd!
Say goodbye to your good night sleep - even though you are not the one who carry it.
Well I hope somepony else will tell the Doctors about the connection between Cadance and Umbra. Because I think Umbra is going to be having some interesting reactions to “giving” birth.
Extra together here.
Should be you.
Loving this story, it has a nice relaxed feel to it that just makes things fun.
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First fixed, second I don't grasp?
Very interesting, indeed. I have to wonder, though... would Umbra also be considered Flurry's mother? In spirit, at least, since she is practically going through labor, too.
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Is Shining?
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He's the dad and mom.
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Unless I am misunderstanding, that is Umbra speaking and saying that Shifting will be sitting back and eating while Umbra goes into danger. As written it implies that Umbra will be the one sitting back and eating.
Which would mean that first "I" should be "you" to refer to Shifting, otherwise Umbra is referring to herself as the one staying inside.
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It's more like Umbra giving an impression of what she thinks Shifting would do in a joking manner.
At least, that's what I think.
So the Doombirnger Destroyer of Empires, Shatterer of Crystal Hearts, Sovereign of Insomnia is soon to be born.
Let the word go out for a Hero able to Tame said storms the Doombringer shall wreak upon the hapless empire.
Welp all they have is a hapless Magical Scholar Hope Sunburst keeps the Fledgling forbearance Spell handy to damp the Doombringers Magic surges.
Even if he wasn't a changeling, I'd still be nervous.
Not even the fun to be with a Stallion yet, having to life the birth trough... Harsh...
Hmm events have defiantly been switched around in this universe, or has one been added?
The Equestrian Olympics is meant to happen long before Flurries birth, but as we know not even the coliseum is done yet; so could this be a different foal there having? only reading the next chapter shall I know!
Also 57 chapters in, we now know that a little over eleven months have passed since Umbra's appearance in this world.
Changeling alert, got to catch & snuggeling them all.
Shining Armor literally will be the historically first stallion to say if foal birth is in fact more painful than anything else.
I guess as painful as silently gas and a kick to the nuts.
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