Why do think that Sombra did something very stupid and now he has a new enemy to deal with.

Well, that link is gonna get awkward real fast. xD

I also look forward to Twilight figuring out there's a friendly dark magic-user within talking distance. She's going to have... so... many... questions.

Veeeeeery interesting!! I look forward to more!

Soon she was jogging out of the library, book secured against her side, a due-back card poking free of it. She would be sure to get it back on time. Wouldn't do to be the library's first tardy return in over a thousand years.

She'd organize the whole thing for fun.

This fic is so cute!

But Umbra was coloring. "Oh wow..." She rubbed at the cheek that would have been being nuzzled were she Cadance. "I can feel both sides of that."

I have a feeling whatever fate that brought Umbra here are trying to ship a threesome between them. Are you certain we don't need any of the mature tags here just in case?

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And when she realizes that the dark magic user barely knows how magic works, let alone how dark magic works, she'd be extremely frustrated and starts to either find answers or go Twileynanas.

"Разве вы двое не одно и то же?" Она не была уверена в этом на 100%, но они, казалось, вели себя как замешанные. "Ты не против этого?"

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What a very interesting story, I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

You have a solid concept, but you need to have a proof reader as translation doesn't always work well.

For example

"So he has your sister?

should be "So he has a sister?"

The only other thing I could recommend is being more descriptive when setting the scene & how the things around them are

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This is, as they call it in the biz, a typo.

I only speak English. I don't promise it's always accurate, but I can't blame that.

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I think I had a brain fart. No idea why I thought you were Russian XD

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No harm done, and any typo reported is a dead typo.

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Great story and happy to see you writing again. Ignore me if you never stopped and my brain broke lol

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The words flow without end! Well, I mean, people are paying for these words, and I do not let them down!

Ah OK I see now, transgender male who wishes to be female.... well, definitely got their wish in that case, though not in the way they expected I assume heh.

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This is a story about becoming/being comfortable in your skin (or pelt).

Your sentence structure is very.... Jarring.
I don't know how to describe the problem. Reads like someone who learned a different languages sentence structure wrote it.
Have you tried getting an editor to look for your work?

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I can only act on reported typos. That they are present is a known quality.

"Still, a three way sensory connection. I've never heard of such a thing before... Surely somepony somewhere wrote something about it..."

Favorite desert

I quite like the…directness of the Great Sandy one’s name in Australia, but I hear the Gobi is very nice.

Applejack licked her lips. "Ain't nothin' wrong with some of that, but have ya tried apple ice-cream? Ya wouldn't think it'd work, but, trust me, it's good."

You Better Be God Damn Right About That!

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Cadance colored faintly with a laugh. "I feel certain he is not trying to do anything that will give me reason to chew his ear later."

I was gonna mention something about that but Cadence beat me to it. XD

Ya know, i'm pretty sure we never actually get an outright explanation for exactly what the deal with the three way sensory thing is, though I think that the Hear gave it to them for some unknown reason. It'll probably be important later

Great start, nice to see Umbra getting friends in her new life.

Sooo... Next Snu-Snu will be interessting ♡

Being the male and female at the same time...
Umbra will love their lovemaking ♡

Umbra snorted at the question. "Only if you ask me to nicely."

Rainbow threw a hoof at Umbra. "See, they... wait..."

Guess Spike isn't going to be known as the great and glorious Spike in the Empire. O well... maybe next emergency he is present in the Crystal City 👍

I wonder if the Crystal Heart is a pony invention, since emotional magic seem to fit rather better to Changelings, at least they should know something about it. Wouldn't surprise me if Chrysalis used it as a gathering ground for love, unless someling else was claiming the territory at the time.

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Honestly, a whole lot of creatures in mlp:fim seem like they would be more qualified to make something like the crystal heart.

Ex:
1. Windigo's
2. Changeling's
3. The Nightmare Force
4. Umbrum's
5. Discord
6. The Tree of Harmony

Now, don't get me wrong when i say that, I simply mean that the Crystal Heart in comparison to other Equestrian Artifacts is extremely odd. I honestly doubt it was made by ponies specifically for ponies.