She appeared as if from nowhere, a dark shadowed figure full of dread magic. Shining Armor and Cadance scowled with apprehension, but her attention was on the _other_ shadowy overlord that stood before her. Only one could remain.
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Wensley is suspicious. Maybe that's just my paranoia talking, but the cutie mark is too simple for being one that incorporates more than one kind of image. Just the fact that it's apples and a block of cheese; two very different things whose only similarity is that they're sourced from farms if you trace them back far enough. So two very different things that aren't in any way incorporated into each other. Like, if it was an apple cheesecake or a platter of sliced apples and cheeses, I'd understand, but that cutie mark stands out too much.
I'm thinking changeling. We're too early for Thorax, plus he's far too composed in front of this story's equivalent to Spike in the eyes of the natives to be that sack of anxiety. Also too collected to be Chrysalis anywhere near somepony so adored; she'd get Umbra alone and pounce like a rabid squirrel on that kind of love. Perhaps a changeling spy wanting to meet Umbra multiple times to try to build a profile?
Also, I was originally thinking umbrum mole, but this seems too far removed from what they've been doing so far. Still, if it turns out to be that, let it be said here that that was my first thought.
Also also, if it turns out that Wensley really is a part of the Apple family, and really is just a pony on business like he said, then first of all, way to plant a red herring, and second, I apologies to cheez-ie appul hoers through the screen.
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My first thought was actually an apple ancestor caught in the banishment of the empire, but it was never mentioned, so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Except Granny Smith's family were seed peddlers before they settled next to the Everfree Forest.
Wensley... now, where have I heard that name before?
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Fair enough. Ahile you have the advantage of a morw complete canon knowledge, I've seen a lot of fanfiction toss it all out of the window in place of something else. We shall see, I suppose. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Until proven otherwise, if a fanfiction starts part way into canon you generally assume that's the point of divergence for an alternate universe.
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And I reiterate that nothing is yet proven, assumed or otherwise, until the author themselves have stated as such or posted the written chapters. I personally don't generally assume anything, keeping my mind open for plot twists. :3
Oh look we have the villainous friend traitor archetype rearing his head. Wonder how many chapters it will take before he turns on her
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I mean I totally think this guy will go traitor, but he's at least a canon character
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shadow horf happy prance
apples?
I think she could ask Applejack if he is one of the Apple.
I've seen how this plays out before. Wensley is going to be perfectly normal in absolutely every way; the reason he's interested in her is because he's got a haunted charcuterie or something.
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That have hilarious double-entendre considering he's a stallion. Or at least that's how I see it.
What is the current number of Crystal ponys? They are the only population in the world so i guess breeding is a priority as well raising them and education from young to old.
Brushed while sleeping? I think that would be rather relaxing than anything. A massage can help someone to fall asleep, I know it from experience