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Posted! I hope more people can enjoy these fine additions!

The little additions there are actually pretty creepy, lol.

I can see you.

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Needs a lot of combing through for grammar, but it's otherwise still enjoyable. It's nice when there's a SCP that isn't outright evil, but it still...Are they transported to Equestria?

What the hell kind of Equestria is it if this thing came from it? Mmmmm. You might have another short story to explore.

It should be noted that agent Name Here was admitted to Pinkie Pie Can see You hospital at age nine for And She Is Coming For You!. During this time he was unable to see either his parents or friends, while his condition worsened.

Might want to tidy that one up to be better [redacted]-style

SCP-62162... Pinkie Pie, how many times I told you to not torture humans

But SCP-94233... Twilight Sparkle, it's too easy, and many of them deserve it for what they did to the young ones

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My only issue with this story is that we never got to see it from Pinkie’s perspective on what she does after the candle is blown and why she does it. Course that’s what my head canon is for. Way I see it, Pinkie is more like a rescuer, saving children from abusive homes by first throwing them the party they missed and then bringing them to Equestria in hopes of helping them start over. Her intentions are good, though what she does as quote unquote “punishment” to the neglectful or abusive parents and the field agents that try to stop her is a tad, extreme. But maybe at the end she must've felt she had no other options, she tried it her usual way only for the parents to possibly make the child’s life even worse and after getting caught in the act of throwing a party and had a particular bunch of mean parents coming and seriously hurting one of their own child right in front of her while making her watch she just snapped resulting in a split personality, one side being kind and protective of kids, the other being vengeful and violet towards any and all abusive or neglectful families and anyone who gets in the way if her other half’s mission to save the kids. By the time she came to her senses to her kind self the first time around and saw what she had done, she didn’t feel no remorse. In fact she felt that it was her only option to save the child, that’s why she does these things. She may not like doing it to the kids parents but she feels she has no other choice. Personally, I can sympathize Scp-62162 Pinkie Pie. She’s just doing what ever she can to make children happy, it may not be right to us. But for Pinkie it’s the best she option she has. Anyway that’s my headcanon, what do yah think.

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Awesome. Still working on the rest of it. Wasn't expecting the positive response, so I never wrote down the full thing I came up with.

The warning here is that you need to take care of your kids or Punkie will take care of them and the neglectful parents.

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The text in question will refuse to be redacted, because really what does red act like? Is it mad? I mean, Big Mac is really nice and he's red and reallly nice. Ooh! Colors!

I would someone to make a video about this

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Damnit lol

Loved the addendum, it really helps flesh out this Skipper and how she interacts with children who can't celebrate their birthday through no fault of the parents. Helps to show more of not!Pinkie's motivations.

With Pinkie being able to heal some terminally ill children, maybe the Party Crashers would try and contain and interrogate her to see how she does it rather than extermination (plus the SCP Foundation is more about containment, elimination seems more like a Global Occult Coalition thing)

Funnily enough there's already an MTF team that goes by the name "Party Crashers", Y-36, and they're responsible for located and trying to contain instances of SCP-4477 ("Cousin Johnny").

MTF Y-36 perform a similar task in that they search for various family events that could be taken over by the SCP like baptisms, weddings, and funerals rather than birthday parties.

was admitted to Pinkie Pie Can see You hospital at age nine for And She Is Coming For You!.

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