Alternative Universe... Do i smell a Alliance in the future? I like the idea...

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What do you mean, an alliance?

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Between both mirror universes. I just know Celestia ask for it to get a chance to bang herself

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There's already going to be so much selfcest in this... now you're asking me to put Tia and her counterpart in the same room? My, my...

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More snu snu is less time alone

But actually to help eatch other in time of need, to warn eatch other of threats that might have a equivalent in the mirror universe and so on...

Damn, the first chapter is like a rollercoaster, I'm already in love with it. A psychologist would have a field day with this, masterfully done.

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Thanks, my conveniently named follower.

While I am by far not an expert in psychology (or anything else, for that matter), I did put a lot of work into this chapter.

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Pfft. I'm the main character, there's no coincidence.

A good start so far! I am guessing the story will be updated every Saturday, when possible?

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You know, I'm tempted to say something along the lines of 'Sure, let me just quit my job and win the lottery so that I can become a full-time author with no income whatsoever' and 'If I get a thousand likes within the next week or so, I will', but seeing that that's not going to happen in a million years, how about no. I won't update this every Saturday.

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Ok

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Feynna made a blog in regards to that. I suggest you read that and then think about what you're asking of authors on this site. Most of which do this for free and write in their spare time.

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Thanks, I missed it somehow.

I promise, I completely do this on purpose because I’m a dirty tease. I do not take responsibility for anyone finding their pants bulging or getting soaked in arousal.

I love how unapologetically shameless you are about this.

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Well, well, well now this is not something I expected to see after I come online In a while but it is a welcome surprise. I shall see to it that I try to finish this 24k words chapter soon

it's by far preferable that those poor, poor kids use their parent's credit card for Netflix and Co. without their permission in comparison to using it to pump ungodly amounts of money into some crappy casino app that should have been banned a long time ago from the App Store

I'm sensing some resentment here already

I'm gonna make the educated guess and say that Our Queen (yes capitalised on purpose) here is Toby's clone. But the most intriguing question here and one that remains unanswered in the main storyline was why is he a clone? . Also I have to say,your segue to smut is impeccable as always and it is still as hot as it has ever been.

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i dont know if this is correct but wasent it the two other changlings with the queen are the duplicates of who twilight and sunset were as humans? If that is correct then could it be possible that the device used ripped the memorys from the originals and stuffed them in the queen?
I havent read twin suns in a while but if that is true then that means that this is where twilight and sunsets past lives memorys have been sent. also where the soul that got away went

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Aye that right matey. The Adorable Princess and Angy Prince are indeed Twilight and Sunset's memories. Here's hoping they meet and feel extremely awkward around each other.

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im assuming that they dont have duplicate memorys and what was lost from the original is with the copys so it might be more a case of them feeling more complete and at ease around eachother if you meet

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Aye, true dat. Just thought Our Queen here would be more awkward what with them 'stealing' the memories n all that

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im pretty sure it is just a case of the memorys/soul fragments (the damaged souls that left likely left the memorys in the form of fragments of the soul) had nowere else to go and likely would have vanished otherwise so they were drawn to the nearest soul possible

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Haah, I love reading these theories, I missed that so much.

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But the most intriguing question here and one that remains unanswered in the main storyline was why is he a clone?

Watch Fringe. :P

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and we missed reading your stuff

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Aww.

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Curses. More homework. You will rue the day you made me watch the hit TV series of sci-fi filled with memorable characters and intriguing plotlines you call Fringe

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The horror! The horror! *faints*

A... A PREQUELLLL!!! How could I have missed the fictional gold coming out sometime two days ago?!

wait... chapter 9.5? 11.5? What is this heresy! Half the chapter half the fun

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Who said he asked, hmm?

Alrighty, enough comments before I get spoiled, now I can actually read.

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wait... chapter 9.5? 11.5? What is this heresy! Half the chapter half the fun

More like bonus chapters that wouldn't be a thing, otherwise. You'll see why they are x.5 chapters.

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Also, not a prequel. Dunno how many more disclaimers I need to put on this to get that detail across. Fimfic doesn't have the option to distinguish stories like that. *shrug*

And... they are eating my spider friends now, too. Great. That wasn't... nice. Spiders were misunderstood and innocent creatures, they didn't deserve to be eaten like flies in a fucking flytrap. Oh, and the weird bees were also eaten by those little monster leaves. It was sad seeing them get eaten as they tried to scout it out for a possible new location for a hive, but... it was either that or becoming food for my little spider friends. I'd rather they get along with each other, but such was the way of nature, as sad as it was.

No, spiders are demons that need to be exterminated with extreme prejudice.

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I blame you, it's said to be a sequel on Twin Suns, therefore this must be a prequel

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No, spiders are demons that need to be exterminated with extreme prejudice.

I blame you, it's said to be a sequel on Twin Suns, therefore this must be a prequel

This story is a stand-alone side story to Twin Suns

That's literally the first sentence of the story description, you have no one but yourself to blame.

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So, your side story has a sequel. This implies Twin Suns is part of the side story, just a sequel to the side story, and not the main story.

Sequel or side-story, what's it gonna be, hmm?

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Don't be coy with me, dear.

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I have exactly one thing to say to you.

*boop*

Can't stop me noooooowww!

*runs for the hills... With the cookie jar*

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Nooo! Not the cookies!

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No, spiders are demons that need to be exterminated with extreme prejudice.

don't you dare harm the Lil spiders. I'll have you know that they keep a lot of insect out if you just let them do their thang. They might not be as effective as lizards but every lil spider counts. I do agree that they are hellspawns tho.

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do agree that they are hellspawns tho.

Oh, come on. There are cute spiders, too. :(

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I was tempted to put a spider jump scare here but I decided not to give everyone here a heart attack like I did on a discord sever once.

So, Feynna, you may like spiders more than insects, but most people are the opposite. You says spider are cute? Prove it. If my heart isn’t counting down to self destruction then I’ll…

umm.. what will I do? Give you the cookie jar back? No, I stole that fair and square. Hmm… do you want… free honey? A pet spider? Something? You know know what, you choose.

If I win, I want to steal the honey next.

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This.

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Errrm... I mean... Some of those are still a bit terrifying, but some are cute. I'm totally gonna cheat at call it a tie.

Fluffy bunnies, penguins and now flying pigs. This shows that even with the memories mixed up our Queen here is truly a member of the family.

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I give you this to prove that spiders are indeed the best

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M-must… resist!

Hurrrrrggg!

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Nooo! I missed the spider discussion! Damn it.

Btw. just for the records, tarantulas are best spiders. After radioactive ones, of course.

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The spider queen gives her blessings

Good chapter and start

hopefully fate is kinder to this amore then it was to the original...

They are a Legion of one... Many in one, one shall become many