To think a broken soul like us could accomplish the impossible and create the most powerful nation this world has ever seen... Who am I? Queen Araneae of the Crystal Empire Hive. None shall harm my subjects, not even an upstart delusional umbrum.
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Oooops. xD
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Yes. Forget my blunder. That's what I get for being a dum dum and doing two things at once. >.>
I totally lost the line to this story.
Guess a re-read of every chapter is in order next week.
Meaning i have to skip the glorious new chapter...
It still will be worth the wait 👍
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Uh... right. Doing a bit of a touch-up on those next, just saying. *shrug*
oh my, i though i have to wait a year for new chapter.
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Nah. I've just been preoccupied with the main story these past few months. It shouldn't take me that long to do the first seven/eight chapters for this one to bring them up to snuff. Those are thankfully not in such a sorry state as Twin Suns was. The unedited chapters might take a bit more work simply because I haven't checked them for errors yet, but that's not much of a challenge. Only problem is finding enough free time. I've got about a week of no work where I could put some time into that and hopefully make some progress on that front. If I don't procrastinate too much.
I can't help being spoiled here as you took down Twin Suns from FimFiction. I haven't even started it. You said 2.0 would be uploaded to this site June 24 so i have to wait til tomorrow to hopefully start reading "Twin Suns" my Xbox One can't run google docs nor can my cell and I don't own a computer. So HOPEFULLY I can read "Twin Suns" tomorrow as it is the 24th. I would prefer to read the "original" story first before reading a sequel, side story, or sequel side story. As I know nothing of the world or characters you create. So jumping in a story with an established world or characters i know nothing about without the baseline intro you give in "Twin Suns" is something i don't usually do. Heck you told me on the title page to reference something in "Twin Suns" about your MC which I can't do when you took it down to fix it, and as stated before i can't read "Twin Suns" via google doc
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You could also just read this. Twin Suns and Heart of the Empire happen in two separate universes and this one starts a little bit before Twin Suns. But it is just one day, you know. I'll finish maintenance first thing in the morning when I wake up.
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True but i still want to wait. I look forward to tomorrow then. As I said I want to see the start of the world you created first and not appear when the world is already there, where i know nothing of the world and the rules governing it. Also if I read this story without the context of "Twin Suns" i might misunderstand or misjudge it. Which can sour my opinion of the "original" story or expect too much from it. Which can taint a reader's enjoyment. So I ALWAYS try to read the "original" story before reading any of it's sequels, side stories, or sequel side stories. I want to understand the base level rules for an author's world before i read how the rules were changed or see what rules were improved upon and expanded
Said, if the umbrums is made of literally negative emotion, does that make wendigos and sirens their natural predator?
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The sirens? Probably. But not the wendigos due to reasons.
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True, but after usually 2-3 hours the ears start to protest.
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I got used to it, further I have 2 settings with different voices.
It's well worth the time spend listening and I can do it almost 24/7, while working and driving car or when working out etc etc...
I do hope "the final showdown" isn't the end of the story. Would seem quite premature.
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"Final" showdown?
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Last line of the chapter.
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But who is to say the umbrum will be the only threat?