Mark Star is Equestria handyman extraordinary as well as the only human who single handle changed the course of history with one single question, resulting in an unexpected and sexy timeline. A 'what if' story where Twilight refused to be a princess.
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Oh boy.
And as always a single point in time or memory erased can destroy a full on path to what someone is or ever was. Crystal lost, but had her revenge.
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Plus a little funny thing on how once again it was Dash who actually set the course of actions, in everyone future, this time by simply having a small chat. Je talk about coincidence right?
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History is made from small things at the right/wrong place or time and how you/they choose to act. But what Crystal did was make it so Mark has no memory of ever being in a herd. All his mares are gonna be crushed because he won't even remember them as his mates.
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Yep, all because Twilight cave in and choose to help Crystal out. Boy are they gonna a be furious when they found what she did
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I see Fluttershy giving Twilight the Stare while Milky, Umbral and Suprise wanting to beat the shit out of her. The worst will be Molestia...
She's gonna be ROYALLY PISSED OFF!!!!!
Oh you got to be kidding, he don't remember when he started his herd!!!! Dun dun dun duuuuun. Good job on the story
Our life is like a tapestry that we weave with our actions, but if we traveled back to the past and try to change one event of our lives, the tapestry falls apart. What Twilight has done will change who Mark is. He will not be the man that she and the other remember, and the consequences of her actions will be quite severe if she cannot reverse them.
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If it's continued that is.
Sighs i got no idea what the HECK IS GOING ON HERE WITH THIS STORY!
Last i remember they were dealing with evil Harmony and was never finished, ended with a cliff hanger then we got this weird zombie mantis filler now this.
I'm not even sure the writer is even serious anymore, far as I know this is some silly filler that not canon with anything..
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That is because it IS a filler AU stories in honor of Halloween, there are meant to be just silly 'what if...' stories with the real one in paused.
Didn't you read the part where I say the stories will have some mini stories for a while? Why do you think I add 'Halloween Special' on them ?
The story will resume by 31…if I can post it in time
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The Halloween one i easily guessed,
But the lustful sex started in the main canon story, and never had a real ending, felt it was skipped over. I like the story but feels incomplete.
Now there the other one Quarry of Madness, what Twilight did, are we going to see what happens?
Please don't be one of those stories where it ends with the read using their imagination to make their ending for themselves.
Hate them, always unsatisfying to me.
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Sorry I mostly was trying the formula that horror movies used where the situation isn't actually resolved, and just like a minor paused,
The first one was the idea of a zombie that still is around.
The other actually had an ending with a happier tone
The third one was mostly like Final destination where the situation wasn't over in the end.
If demanded I might tackle them back for next halloween as continuations.
But if it helps you feel better, the next one would be plan to had an ending.
Like I say this are meant to be WHAT If...Stories.
They never were intended to be finish in the first place, it just a glimpse of what would have happen if something have happen like Harmony going nuts, the relics having some sort of curse or they were just very well guarded.
Also the next stories would focus more on them too.
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Also don't worry by 31 those stories would have an explanation that hopefully leave you satify with why I'm doing this. And hope to continue later on.
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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
I hope so, The endings are just too good to just leave as it is.
For the Quarry one i can understand...Twilight made a huge mistake one that will cost her everything.
I for sure what see what happens then.
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Jeje trust me there is a logic behind my madness, you will only have to wait to the 31 as my final gift
So Twiggy just fubar'd the whole story just because she couldn't accept that her pure and perfect mentor likes to get railed? For a genius, she sure can be stupid.
I can't believe Twilight did that marks heard is going to pulverize her
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Jeje you thought it was gonna a be Chrysalis who would betray their trust, but it was her!…Twilight!
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At least it doesn't effect the primary timeline, otherwise Flutters, Milky, Umbral, and Surprise would be most indignant.
Murder of Twilight that's all I want to happen at this point somebody please just murder Twilight you don't go f*** you with another man's memories just because you want to have sex with him KILL HER