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Their is nothing wrong with writing about thing that are beyond your experience, but unfortunately a reader can tell that. Don't get me wrong write what you want, but understand your inexpensive makes the content of what you're writing not make sense.

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True, that is why I do it on the first place, to keep working and trying to improve. So this more like a testing ground. And hey, it all about having fun too

Why the story on hiatus?

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I wasn't complete sure if continue it or not. It start as an experiment but I'm starting to fear I might be making something that it doesn't make any sense. Although not gonna a lie…I would like to to see where it leads

“You heard me, Celestia” He went and approached her balcony pointing at the city below. “When we first talked about Twilight you said you were basically tired of being a ruler, that you couldn’t wait to pass the crown and live a simple life, dragging your sister along wherever she wanted to or not, but you know what I haven’t seen once ever since you made me your chore boy? A tired princess! Every day, every moment you have been the princess I have seen you work with a smile on your face and a song in your heart. So don’t go and tell me you want to stop being a princess because that's just a straight off lie!”

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“Oh Ihave an idea, and hey now that I know this.” She grabs his hand. “It means that when we are ready to take that step, it will feel way better than we could only imagine.”

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