Mark Star is Equestria handyman extraordinary as well as the only human who single handle changed the course of history with one single question, resulting in an unexpected and sexy timeline. A 'what if' story where Twilight refused to be a princess.
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I can't say that I care very much for how Rarity comported herself with regards to Mark and his approach to flirting. She wants him to flirt, but then makes him go solo? Then expresses disappointment when he fails? I kind of feel like the approach was wrong. Like they should have made it into a social experiment. Be upfront with mares that Mark is going to try flirting with them and provide feedback about what he was doing right, or how he should have approached the particular target of interest to better succeed at flirting with her. I don't like that Rarity sees other mares exhibiting interest in Mark and then gets all jealous and possessive when the mares start to approach him again.
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