Mark Star is Equestria handyman extraordinary as well as the only human who single handle changed the course of history with one single question, resulting in an unexpected and sexy timeline. A 'what if' story where Twilight refused to be a princess.
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You said root did you mean rotten?
Hmmm I would’ve liked to have seen how this all started instead of being dropped into the middle of it like this. But interesting story so far.
This, in my opinion, is not a good way to open up a story.
Came out of left field and I thought, I skipped the beginning.
But it was nicely done.
Is the maid an oc?
hope we have other character POVs.
Thank you,keep it up!
This was edited? Jeez. Barely possible to read with how much of a mess almost every sentence is.
This chapter threw me for a loop. It's like turning around and saying to yourself: "Oh look! This might be a slice of life story with lewd stuff in it. No problem though!" And then suddenly said story winds up a haymaker and knocks your teeth out with the first chapter. Interesting so far, but that is... not usually how a story should open. I will continue reading.
Wait, wait, what's going on? The first couple of paragraphs knocked me out for a couple of minutes.
The man who got into the world of two-legged ponies, okay... has super strength? Uh, okay... what else: the great master of objects (of all), god in bed (with the princess herself, with whom else), a hero... Yeah, and also a playboy, billionaire and philanthropist. I guess I didn't really want to read anything this evening.