Prologue
By the Bar
I was running, alone, leaving the Freedom controlled Army Warehouses behind me.
My name? Let's go with Runner. I’ll let you guess why.
A gentle breeze was sweeping the land, ruffling the brownish grass and refreshing my face. As useful as it is, my helmet is very uncomfortable. Most stalkers wear theirs all the time, I never understood why.
You only put it on when you need it right?
I coughed, causing me to stop. My Geiger counter bleeped. Sighing, I pulled out a flask of vodka from my vest and took a big gulp from it.
Radiation, the stalker’s excuse for alcoholism.
Chuckling at the thought, I screwed the cap back on and decided to check my gear. My pistols were still attached on my thighs and my rifle was slung across my back, its bipod and scope attached at their place. Nothing was missing from my pouches, my armor and overcoat seemed in good shape. Satisfied, I picked up my carbine and resumed running.
My destination was Rostok... a nice place, guarded by Duty stalkers; used to be an industrial area. Freedom stalkers are generally nicer to be around, but Dutiers are much more professional and disciplined, even more than the few Mercs and PMCs I've encountered during my time in the Zone. That and the sheer number of Duty soldiers stationed in Rostok makes it one of the very few secure places in the Zone.
I actually like this place. It doesn't look clean for sure. After all, it is an old, abandoned factory complex. Decrepit hangars and derelict buildings compose the place, ornamented here and there by rusted catwalks, big pipes running along the walls, the occasional pile of rubble on the ground and broken pieces of machinery. Everything had been fixed with Chatterton and make believe but the area is peaceful and safe -well, as much as the Zone will ever get. Most stalkers are polite and welcoming, except for that guy patrolling on the catwalk near the South entrance... I never knew why the guy was so openly hostile.
I came here for the same reasons as any other stalker: to sell the gear and artifacts I had found. The amount of loot one can amass is impressive if he searches well. And I have two qualities: an urge to explore and a keen eye for detail. I’m no master stalker but hey, I manage well enough on my own.
So there I was, heading for the 100 Rads Bar, to sell my stuff.
I don’t know what I’m going to do after that... a bit of R&R can’t hurt for sure. Meh. Surely somebody will have a job to offer.
That’s what is great in the Zone: the outside world may know economic downturns, war can rage... and nobody cares. The Zone is a world of its own. It has its own economy, its own way of life. There was always something to do, some mutants or some artifacts to hunt, some item to retrieve or deliver; some people to kill... feels like another planet, another world.
I always loved it.
I entered the 100 Rads. It’s a peculiar place, arranged in an old underground bunker... almost a cozy place. Most stalkers come here to have a drink, share stories or find some work, exactly what I needed: a bit of friendly human contact before going back to the active life of a stalker; and an opportunity to make some money.
I passed the guy at the entry who greeted me with his usual “Come in! Don’t stand there!” and made my way to the bar.
It was quite crowded. No table was unoccupied. The voices of the stalkers discussing overlapped, creating an indistinct background noise. Smoke from whatever some stalkers smoked was accumulating under the ceiling.
I sighed contentedly and walked to the bar. I always liked this kind of atmosphere. Animated, anonymous yet friendly.
“Greetings stalker,” greeted Barkeep. “What brings you to my humble establishment?”
“Affairs,” I replied. “I’m also looking for a job, but that can wait.”
Barkeep raised an eyebrow. “Affairs, heh? I like the sound of that,” he said, rubbing his hands together. “What have you got?”
“Two AK-74s, two Sunrise armors. Both in mint condition,” I said, pulling the loot from my backpack. “A few common artifacts, and this nasty piece,” I added, producing a FN F2000 with grenade launcher.
Barkeep’s eyes widened at the sight of the rifle. “Whoa. You sure you want to sell that?” he asked.
I smiled. “I prefer mine. A strange thing to be honest. It looks sort of like an M16, only bigger," I replied, showing the barman my black rifle showing 'Mk.11 MOD.0' inscripted on the side of the receiver. "Perfect for long range sniping as I found, though I do lack practice. And for full auto frenzy, I still have my carbine, so I don’t need this assault rifle,” I explained.
“Where did you get these anyway?”
I shrugged. “Picked them up from the corpses of some mercenaries. they spoke German or maybe a northern language, can't be sure. Makes one hell of a replacement for my old AK and shotgun,” I said.
“You are one lucky son of a gun, stalker. Such things don’t happen every day. Now, about that loot...”
After half an hour of harsh negotiations, we finally agreed for a price of 100000 Roubles. Not bad, but I’d rather have more. I sorely needed money to upgrade my armor to something less lightweight.
I turned away from the counter, leaving Barkeep to his occupations and took a look around. Most stalkers had left the bar, going on about their business. Only a couple remained, sprawled on their tables, probably drunk. I was about to leave the bar when I noticed a small group sitting around a table in a corner. Among the group, one was very tall and of a solid build, his imposing form accentuated by a massive exosuit. He also had a well kept beard. The other was much shorter, he seemed even shorter than me though seemed to be also bulkier than me. He had a rough buzz cut and a messy 5-o'clock shadow that let a couple of nasty scars appear beneath it.
But what really struck me was the... strange creature sitting around the table with them. I had never seen such a thing before. It looked equine in global shape, but comparing it to a horse would have been like comparing a human to a chimpanzee or even a gorilla. Its coat was a pristine white -a rare sight in the Zone- its... mane and tail were bright pink out of all colors, it had a long horn protruding from its forehead and... wings. But the strangest thing was that it was wearing what looked like a custom made suit that, despite bearing the colors of the Monolith, had an emblem very similar to the long lost Clear Sky faction, that was sported by its companions too.
The only words coming to my mind to describe it were ‘flying unicorn’... sort of like in the legends.
What the actual fuck?
I scratched my chin, pensive. I didn't really want to leave yet, I had nothing to do at the moment, and I really wanted to know more about this creature. My curiosity naturally won and I walked up to their table.
I walked by Snitch, the ‘information dealer’, always standing near the bar and clad in its black leather long coat.
“My information could very well be of us-”
“Shut up," I rudely interrupted, not even giving the shady-looking stalker a glance.
Damn creep. It’s like he only knows two phrases.
Once I was next to the small group, I cleared my throat. “*Ahem* Howdy, stalkers.”
The buzzed man looked at me, a wary expression on his face. The flying unicorn was peacefully resting its head on his shoulder, eyes closed, as if sleeping. As I leaned closer to it to get a better view, the bald stalker put a protective hand on its shoulder and pulled it closer to him.
The bearded stalker laughed at his friend and gazed at me, a smile on his face.
“Ah, Strider... always overprotective towards her,” he said with a slight German accent. “What brings you here, stalker?”
Huh. English? Good thing I’m fluent in this language too.
I scratched the back of my head, unsure of what to say. “Well, I’ve never seen such a creature as... her,” began. “What is she? Is she really a she? Where does she come from? Can she fly? I’ve seen her wings. They’re really pretty. What’s her name?”
The bald stalker gave me a wary look.
His friend laughed once more. “Whoa, calm down man, have a seat. What’s your name?” he asked.
“Nivek Runov, but my friends just call me Nivek or Runner. Well, those who are still alive, anyway.”
“Nice to meet you Nivek. Name’s Vano,” the tall man began. "Strange thing, to keep your real name in the Zone," he remarked.
"Yeah, well I'm not on the run or in hiding, so why bother?" I shrugged. "And who are you? An escapee from a prison? An ex-mafioso? A lost soul? An idealist adventurer?"
“I think I would fit in the last category," laughed the bearded man in response. "But when my friends and I are out in the field, I am the heavy weapons guy,"
“Ugh, not again,” said a female voice.
I gazed at the unicorn creature.
“He often does that. The first time it’s surprising, then it’s amusing, but after a while it just gets old,” she explained. “This is Strider,” she added, pointing at the scarred stalker next to her, “and my name is Celestia.”
I smiled. “Nice to meet you Cel-”
...wait.
I stared at the equine creature. “You talk.” I turned towards the Vano. “She. Fucking. Talks.” I shook my head. “Slap me, I want to be sure I’m not hallucinating.”
*SLAP*
The bearded stalker slapped me across the face, sending me tumbling to the floor.
“Vano!” called the creature, outraged. “What was that for?”
The big man shrugged. “What?” he asked. “He literally asked for it.”
I held my jaw in my hand. “It’s okay, I’m okay, I did ask for it after all,” I said, shocked and half-laughing. “Man, you slap hard. And she’s still here. Welp. Guess she’s real.”
The buzzed stalker stood up. “I had a similar reaction when I first encountered her,” he told me. “As Celestia said, my name is Strider.”
As he helped me up, I noticed the tattoo on his arm. I had heard stories about a man wearing such a tattoo. Some viewed him as a hero, others looked actively to kill him... the man was well known.
I jumped back in surprise. “Are you the infamous ‘Marked One’?” I asked.
Strider looked at me, a look of incomprehension on his face. The he looked at his arm. “No,” he simply said. “Though I did meet him.”
“What’s your story anyway?” I asked to the group.
“Oh, it’s a long story,” began Strider. “And a not very interesting one at that, though it does have a few interesting developments... are you sure you want to hear it?” he asked.
“You bet,” I replied, taking a seat around the table.
“Then grab something to eat, open a bottle, because we are going to be here for a while.”
I like where this is going. Well done.
Also.
>"the Zone is a world of its own."
Quick, change the t to a capital T before the grammar neighzis show up and start hatin'.
Ok maybe I'm being a bit buyest here cuz Stalkerr SOC and COP are my favorite fps open world rpg's and i am really loving the vibe the prolog is giving will have to follow it closely nice work oh and here's something to consider
"and my armor seemed and my overcoat seemed in good shape."
I think it would have sounded a lot better if it was just
"my armor and my overcoat seemed in good shape."
without the 1st "and"
Get out of here stalker!
Now that that bit of silliness is out of the way, this is looking much more polished than it did.
I don't get it,if Celestia is in the world of S.T.A.L.K.E.R., then why isn't she using her alicorn goodness magic to make the world a better place?
After being ill and forgetful, time to get round to reading this.
This is gonna be good. Again.
wow this chapter painted abit of a world here i never played nor heard of STALKER but i can clearly picture the envirement and atmosphere very well done :3
interesting work so far. your really good at getting readers immersed. ive never played stalker but youve made me interested in 'the zone' and wth celestia is doing there. should be a gd read :)
Im a little surprised celestia is so... Open in this world, that is... Around humans. I guess this is a in medas rae, so it should be explained.
Also, i thought this "strider" guys name was "strelok"
Wow. Very nice job. Очень хорошо сделано. And I couldn't help but laugh when you shut Snitch up. The whopping two sentences he says get annoying pretty fast.
I'm getting a strong desire to dust off the S.T.A.L.K.E.R. games and play them yet again... or at least read through the Strugatskys' Roadside Picnic one more time.
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Job accomplished then.
A bunch of sentences start with 'I' or 'It', and "Only a couple" has two spaces in it where there should be only one.
That all being said, it looks pretty good for only your first story. Wish my first story had as much as a positive reception.
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((You ever do any S.T.A.L.K.E.R. roleplay on Garrysmod? It's pretty fun, my main character on that server was a man named 'Disco'.))
Never even heard of the game, but this is already starting to look good. I will say that this story is a leg up on most of the other stories on the site by pure basis of grammar and flow. There were only a few places where you made mistakes, and the mistakes themselves were insignificant. Also, you handled the introduction into the world pretty well. The exposition was brief, yet telling. I know just enough about the world to want to read more, so you've accomplished your goal there. Also, the elements of the STALKER universe didn't really feel that foreign to me, which is a good thing. I can empathize with the NPC's only having two or three phrases. I always liked to play a little game where I could see how many catch phrases I could get right on the first try. You've done a good job establishing the story, and I'm excited to read more.
2269010 how can she do that?
2891475 Strider and Strelok are two different guys. Strider is an ex-Monolith, and I can't remember Strelok being in any faction...
Then you are too stupid to live, even outside the Zone.
That is how I describe them, too!
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Because the Zone would be upset with her if she did. And you don't upset the Zone if you desire to live.
I fully believe that the Zone is a fully sentient eldritch location, with the power to smite people in an instant or rain luck upon them: better not to risk pissing it off.
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That's what I'm thinking. Such an OP rifle...
Vano is Georgian (Kartvelian) and speaks with corresponding accent, not German.