RASERIX VICEROY has had enough of the games, but instead of killing himself like a beta male, he joins the USMC to become a badass so powerful and relentless that even life itself fears him. Winding up in Equestria will put him to the test.
Uh..... Someone should give him advice. I don't even know if a soldier accept to play game or not though . If yes, they don't have even bother to remember anyway.
Edit: okay, this is the one I found that ridiculous. Is this a troll fic?
11050976 Not a troll-fic. It's a compelling and emotional story of a rage-induced man who has the soul of a warrior and unforeseen willpower, yet he feels empty inside and struggles to find his purpose.
11050984 Uh huh. Well then, you are not successful to portray a soldier in real life though. They don't even bother to remember the game they play. All they focus is mission.
Edit: I doubt that Human is exist in Equestria
P/S: What kind of commander is that? No commander will say "you know what to do" when a soldier report that all of the team dead.
This reads like an angsty 16 yr old's weird fantasy of the Marine Corps, circa like just after desert storm or something. I know this is probably a meme story and all, but still lmao
11050995 I mean realistically the only sound here would be this character crying after being rejected at MEPS for failing the psych eval, and never even making it to boot. It's probably all an elaborate joke and all, but on the off-chance it isn't I've worked for DoD and the Corps specifically to know how the system works so this physically pains me lol
Okay, look, seriously, what the hell was happening in that head of yours when you wrote this pile of drek? The only thing going for this is a lack of spelling and grammar errors. The rest is complete and utter drivel, and I don't have to look past the second paragraph to know that.
I can't tell if this is written with a completely straight face, or if it's meant to be a subversive parody of "Sheepdog" Chris Kyle-wannabe boot mentality.
All that's missing is your OC munching crayons and jerking off in a porta-john.
You know it's sad when the comment section is better than the actual story. I try to give a story at least at 3 chapter benefit of the doubt but I couldn't even make it through the second chapter before I had to give it up and I was struggling through the first chapter. I don't even know how to express my disbelief and how you the author thinks that the military works like that. Truly I am absolutely baffled!
Uh..... Someone should give him advice. I don't even know if a soldier accept to play game or not though . If yes, they don't have even bother to remember anyway.
Edit: okay, this is the one I found that ridiculous. Is this a troll fic?
11050976
Not a troll-fic. It's a compelling and emotional story of a rage-induced man who has the soul of a warrior and unforeseen willpower, yet he feels empty inside and struggles to find his purpose.
11050984
Uh huh. Well then, you are not successful to portray a soldier in real life though. They don't even bother to remember the game they play. All they focus is mission.
Edit: I doubt that Human is exist in Equestria
P/S: What kind of commander is that? No commander will say "you know what to do" when a soldier report that all of the team dead.
This reads like an angsty 16 yr old's weird fantasy of the Marine Corps, circa like just after desert storm or something. I know this is probably a meme story and all, but still lmao
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I like that sound.
11050995
I mean realistically the only sound here would be this character crying after being rejected at MEPS for failing the psych eval, and never even making it to boot. It's probably all an elaborate joke and all, but on the off-chance it isn't I've worked for DoD and the Corps specifically to know how the system works so this physically pains me lol
11050984
Ikr, its such a heart wrenching story of a soldier struggling with his inner rage
Oh look, another angsty Gary Stu Creator's Pet in Equestria.
Hard pass from me.
11050984
More like it's a story written by someone who knows nothing about the Marines and doesn't know about these things called psych evaluations.
How to say I wanted to be a Marine but couldn't make the cut, so now I'm going to do it in fanfiction.
Okay, look, seriously, what the hell was happening in that head of yours when you wrote this pile of drek? The only thing going for this is a lack of spelling and grammar errors. The rest is complete and utter drivel, and I don't have to look past the second paragraph to know that.
And if this is a trollfic, at least own up to it.
I can't tell if this is written with a completely straight face, or if it's meant to be a subversive parody of "Sheepdog" Chris Kyle-wannabe boot mentality.
All that's missing is your OC munching crayons and jerking off in a porta-john.
This is shit. Block me if you want to stop spitting on your work, slut-writer.
You know it's sad when the comment section is better than the actual story. I try to give a story at least at 3 chapter benefit of the doubt but I couldn't even make it through the second chapter before I had to give it up and I was struggling through the first chapter. I don't even know how to express my disbelief and how you the author thinks that the military works like that. Truly I am absolutely baffled!