Newest chapter is woefully under-proofread. If you find errors please point them out for me to fix

OK, i definitely need to read this!

"Anon. Where exactly are we? I may have been... tunnel-visioned, so to speak. Last night, I mean."

"Seriously? Kind of hard to miss the biggest palace in the nation."

Chrysalis felt her heart drop.

"WHAT!?"

Yeah this is gonna be good.

Noticed a typo.

...reputation is in tact.

Should be one word 'intact'.

"I'm the only one of my kind, so kidnappers, thieves, Lyra..." Anon shuddered at the last one.

Of course, Lyra. I don't even need to ask what happened.

Wouldn't Lyra be consider a kidnapper, also did the tittle of 'king' actually means he controls the changelings? Boy I hope he doesn't have a hive mind, that could get awkward

"Seriously? Kind of hard to miss the biggest palace in the nation."

Chrysalis felt her heart drop.

"WHAT!?"

So, to reiterate, Anon fucked a queen in a queen sized bed inside of a castle.

... ...

I'm trying to think of a good joke here, but it's not coming to me, hang on... Um... Your princess is in another, A new meaning to regicide, the crown of his dick crossed the draw bridge, fuck it, I got nothin'.

Alright, I'm still with you so far. I'm actually starting to feel hopeful that this won't end up another "Chrys doms the shit outta you" kinda things.

I like this.

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Much appreciated

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Don't worry. If I do write Anon as a sub at any point, it will be an exception and not a rule

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I like you

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Lyra's much more... invasive, shall we say

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Snrk silly Chrissy you played yourself!
Connection established and confirmed. Ready for command!

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The irony

Great story so far

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I didn’t find any but then again I didn’t look and when I write mine have tons

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Na last time she just broke into anons house when he was asleep and sucked on his fingers for three hours then left before He woke up. The only reason anon knows this happens is that she bragged about it the next day and showed pictures

Also I like that there is an actual plot to this so I encourage what you said in the author’s note

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Oh my~

Speaking of eyes, they stared into Anon's. Wide and fearful, like a cat who was just caught trying to break into the catnip container.

As they stared at each other, the new creature slowly began to slide her muzzle down his erection once more.

"DON'T JUST KEEP SUCKING LIKE NOTHING'S WRONG!"

Loved that line!

This story is only going up for me! 10/10 on this chapter alone! Can't wait for more, but I try!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Same

I kinda want the story more than the smut right now

UHHH???...OOPS...she yeets to thewindow

Damn, sir! The plot was good, but the plot seems so much better that I'll barely even care for the next chapter. Maybe reconsider balance between plots? Not necessarily in chapters order, but rather in their length? And I haven't asked for less plot, to be clear.

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Act of yeeting someone or something outta da window is called defenestration, so you might have been looking for a word self-defenestration or rather autodefenestration. That's unless you have hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia and I completely haven't helped with it right here, have I?

Omg I'm in love with your story plzzzz continue what your doing plzzzz

Man I like the stories so much I reread it already three times can’t wait for the next couple chapters

This was a fun and interesting i hope they get together I can't wait to see what happens next (no rush).

Update?

Can’t wait for an update

I came for the porn and satyrd for the plot. Nice

See what happens when your lust drunk Chyrssy? You may be more than literally screwed!

I keep checking this every few days, hoping for an update. And I will continue to do so until one pops up. Or Until I see the Hiatus or Cancelled tags...

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Lol. I'm sorry my friend. I have pretty severe adhd and unless I can get obsessed with writing for a time, I don't have any motivation at all to do it. I know what I want for the next 3 chapters, but I have a lot of difficulty putting finger to keyboard.

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Oh, dude, I know exactly what you mean. You take a look at my profile and you'll find it full of incomplete, hiatused or the like stories. Is why I don't go demanding for more, or asking: "Whens the next chapters? When's the next chapter? I need more!"

Is this dead
I know it’s probably not *dead* but rather on an indefinite hiatus but I just wanted to comment or something

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As dead as I am inside.

Which is almost but I still have hope

Are u ded

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No just really lazy. Tell ya what, I'll post a chapter within 24 hours just for you

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Ok, 48 hours. I've suddenly been struck by inspiration and this chapter is now going to be twice as long as I intended.

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A Sports
It's in the game