nice work on the chapter

Pretty good, omission of body type/breast and ass size is an eh, kinda makes imagination a bit wacky because if we weren't told we were a female beforehand, we would have no clue what gender we were, but otherwise great job so far.

You can feel her heard nipples poking you through her black, tattered dress.

unless Chrysalis nips start making a sound I recommend changing heard to hard nipples. This chapter going along nicely

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Figured it'd be easier for self-insertion. Plus, I don't wanna specify the size and have the characters compliment the size only to insult a reader who's smaller. That was my train of thought.

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Fair but still point remains that the only indicator that its female is when it tells you you are female

Nice teaser. Lets see what the next chapter looks like when its get released.

Looking forwards to this

This is an interesting with potential.

I'm curious to see where it goes.

Hows the story goin.

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Pretty well. I just have a ton of fics to write as well as an RPG I’m working on. :)

I may have next week off from my real job for vacation. I just need to survive this week...

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Did ya get that vacation

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Yessie

Rereading this again and I cant wait for the next chapters, its already great so far.

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Sounds like a promising idea to me.

The story looks interesting so far.
I look forwards to see where this experiment goes.
Although I expected Crysalis would lead her to a cave or another, more enclosed hiding spot first.
That not only reduces the chance of them getting found but also helps keeping them warm.

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They’ll keep each other warm :P

Not gonna lie, was hoping for more (only 1 chapter at time of writing) keep it up