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nicely done! loved the cameo of featherweight
But what about very old Friends
I have no sympathy for that bch Sweet Aid. I don't know if she's now dead or was just beaten and raped, but I'll say this right now that she got what she deserved.
If she had just focused on adults this wouldn't really be that big of a deal or even of any interest to me. Thieves always go for adults, and her being ambushed in the cell would've just been debt collectors finally catching up to her. But going after something that greatly affected sickly children really made me want her to be taken down. Like Cider Mac said:
Side note, well done Arthur. Both for catching Sweet Aid and for getting it on with Johanna/Mayor Mare.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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gandalf the gray
Another good chapter keep up the good work !
You should let Arthur placing cool guitar music like Johnny Cash Folsom Prison blue
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And Gandalf the white,
And Monty Python and the Holy Grail's black knight.
I’M SO CONFUSED! Is cinder a bad guy or a good guy with evil deeds?! I thought maybe he would be the villain and Arthur would bring him in for his crimes but now im lost?! Because so far I would do all these things Cinder has done! There was that bit of info about him in ponyville about his past that made him out like a crook but so far he’s been a “good” guy minus the incident with rarity that he apologized for. SOMEONE TELL ME IF I SHOULD HATE HIM OR LOVE HIM!
Ok, whoever this Cider guy is, I hope you deal with him soon. Cause at this point, he reminds me of Castio from Far Cry 6.
With that bit of cider mac at the end, it’s almost always a nice touch to give a bad guy a ‘even evil has standards’ moment
... I am ok with this Cider Mac.
I'm honestly starting to like Cider Mac, though I'm unsure if he's the antagonist or not. While he has hurt a lot of ponies, most seem to have deserved it, and the situation with one of his goons and Rarity was obviously out of his control. He is a lawfull evil so to speak, he knows how the world works and has clear standards that not even he would break. Respect.
This just popped in my head while reading, but whenever Arthur is being addressed as Mr. Morgan, I can't help but think of Dexter Morgan.
Aside from that, very nice.
I wonder what they did to her.
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he totally is the antagonist. He's just another Dutch. Sure he isn't sucmmy enough to go after foals and people who don't actively go against him but he's still a killer who cares about the profit margins deep inside. It's all about the damn money
Very just
How the hell did this Cider Mac enter the prison without Celestia and Luna knowles?
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plot armor
New chapter ????
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i think sweet aid got gang raped in that cell alright she made a huge mistake stealing from the hospital alright cider mac may be evil but at least he has a heart for the poor foals in the hospital and Arthur cheering up one alright
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.... she just got the ever living shit beaten out of her. Why the heck would you say that?