Its the month that all stallions dread. A curse where they can't 'get some fun'. Among all of these stallions, a certain confused pegasi under the command of Shining Armor asks one very crucial question... (No Nut November Story)
Not wanting to let this continue, the young blue pegasi begrudgingly helped the griffon up, though not without a fair punishment as Gallus nearly barfed upon being suplexed by the young pegasi, before being set onto the floor.
We would either have to fight or I would have to throw up in his direction.
“Whenever I feel like it, and I think I have enough fun today.” Midnight said, trying his best not to laugh at the fallen griffon. Gallus let out a sigh of relief as he began to lift himself again.
So, every single day, then?
“Yeah, no kidding,” Gallus said, wanting to enter a hint of sarcasm, but he already tried that, and thus instead of their lesson ending an hour or two ago, the young griffon had to endure everything else that he felt till now. He found out the hard way that Midnight either took jokes too seriously or liked to turn the jokes around against his opponents. It’s not like Midnight didn’t know how to say jokes, he had managed to cause Gallus to laugh a few dozen times before he hit him again obviously, but it seemed that he wanted to teach Gallus some of the rules in a more… ‘unconventional’ way.
Do they really do this in the military?
The guard is more of a propaganda thing than anything, hence why the Changeling Invasion… went as bad as it went.” Midnight said, trailing off a bit at the mentioning of that event, before smiling at Gallus.
So he’s been there for that long?
“Rainbow Dash. She’s one of the more cooler teachers, but also a bit annoying, especially when it comes to pranks. And considering you threw me down at least a hundred times, you’re around her level in terms of annoyance… a good annoyance mind you. She on the other… hoof? Claw? Hand? Erm… not so much.” Gallus stated, causing Midnight to smirk.
There’s different types of annoying?
Sure, Gilda and Gabby are ok, but I feel that they, especially Gilda, are meant to be there. I… I didn’t have a place there.
Seeing your superiors wrestle, fills you with.... Excitement. 😘 The unconventional training will definitely give him an edge. Never underestimate diversity. Keep going! ;)
10533877 I should seriously give you the role of being a reviewer/critique because you always raise good points
(1) Oof indeed (2) Perhaps. (3) No, but Midnight had been given permission to try new ideas. (4) I tried to make a 'concrete timeline' for my story, and thus after everything was put in place, Midnight was at least around within that time period, whether he was in the military or not depends on the actual time difference between Season 1 and Season 9 (because this story takes place a bit after Season 9, excluding 'The Last Problem')/ (5) A good annoyance and a bad annoyance. Think of that kid who might be annoying but you find whatever he does fun in the end, and compare it to the kid that's just annoying. (6) Gallus says that Gilda is more suited to be in Griffonstone, but if it were to be between Gabby and Gallus, he feels that Gabby would be better in Griffonstone, because at least she's more connected to friends like Gilda. Gallus has no place in Griffonstone though, that's what he's trying to point out. (7) No it's just a genuine expression of excitement. It would've made sense if I said 'Determination' instead of 'Excitement' right?
Finally a weakness of our Gary Stu? The tickles? IIIIIIInnnnteresting .... It was a chapter that was more on the comedy side, the chapter was pleasant. I think that only in the following one will we clarify the doubts previously left in the previous chapter.
In any case the episode was very good, and I think I agree with one of the comments, the training is very unconventional, but I think it could work ... "DODGE!" It was fun XD.
10534625 Please remember that our RP Midnight is different from this Midnight. But yes I had to enter a lot of comedy, this story is supposed to be full of jokes and such things. Thank you
Oh, of course I know that, and I like the use of such a simple comedy because due to where I am from, sometimes it is difficult for me to read fics that have some too elaborate comedy either because they have some references that I don't understand or because you have a particular use to refer to something and I don't understand it.
10534720 So, we predict that Midnight was given a really vague version of The Talk in which he comprehended none of it on an emotional level, but a more interesting question is if he's simply asexual or something else that's not conducive for arousal during the most sexually tense month of the year...
10534744 Depends on the direction of the fic. Personally we think there's an underlying issue with brain development that caused a misalignment that caused a cascade of small changes over the years in comparison to the standard pony. Alternatives include he's a damaged changeling with a geis, an alien (trans dimensional or otherwise), displaced, or Displaced. (yes there's a difference).
“Well let me introduce you to him. This is Gallus. Gallus, this is the cafeteria mare who never bothered to mention her name to me.” Midnight said casually, causing Gallus to snicker as the lunchmare deadpanned before rolling her eyes.
Plot twist: Lunchmare is her name. (It really helped her to get this job, by the way.) Edit: Or not...
“Hey! Why did you hit me!?” The young griffon said, clutching his stomach. At least it didn’t hurt, but it certainly caught him off guard.
And here I thought an ongoing guard would be on guard...
Most of the guards choose ‘the easy’ path, doing the minimum they have to do to pass. I attribute this as one of the main causes that our military is a bit defunct. No, not a bit. It’s a complete train wreck. The guard is more of a propaganda thing than anything, hence why the Changeling Invasion… went as bad as it went.
“Probably yes. I’m no longer her student, so she has no obligation to limit herself anymore towards me. She could prank me as much as she wants and I won’t be able to do much against her.”
Except he can. He is a royal guard now, and she is technically "attacking" a royal guard facility. Not that he would ever manage to catch her, but still...
Ah, nice work, worth the wait! And nothing wrong with a little tickle fun.
Midnight, just friendly advice, never use the sentence "right behind me"
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Midnight:
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10533501
Yeah. Or the "you and what army" for that matter
10533507
L!
(Flashback to DragonBall Z Abridged)
10533718
You know how I said in the Author's Notes that some things influence me?
Hence this is an example.
We would either have to fight or I would have to throw up in his direction.
So, every single day, then?
Do they really do this in the military?
So he’s been there for that long?
There’s different types of annoying?
Trust me gabby is not meant to be there.
Was that meant to be sexual?
Seeing your superiors wrestle, fills you with.... Excitement. 😘
The unconventional training will definitely give him an edge. Never underestimate diversity.
Keep going! ;)
10533877
I should seriously give you the role of being a reviewer/critique because you always raise good points
(1) Oof indeed
(2) Perhaps.
(3) No, but Midnight had been given permission to try new ideas.
(4) I tried to make a 'concrete timeline' for my story, and thus after everything was put in place, Midnight was at least around within that time period, whether he was in the military or not depends on the actual time difference between Season 1 and Season 9 (because this story takes place a bit after Season 9, excluding 'The Last Problem')/
(5) A good annoyance and a bad annoyance. Think of that kid who might be annoying but you find whatever he does fun in the end, and compare it to the kid that's just annoying.
(6) Gallus says that Gilda is more suited to be in Griffonstone, but if it were to be between Gabby and Gallus, he feels that Gabby would be better in Griffonstone, because at least she's more connected to friends like Gilda. Gallus has no place in Griffonstone though, that's what he's trying to point out.
(7) No it's just a genuine expression of excitement. It would've made sense if I said 'Determination' instead of 'Excitement' right?
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thank you. hope you found it fun
Finally a weakness of our Gary Stu? The tickles? IIIIIIInnnnteresting .... It was a chapter that was more on the comedy side, the chapter was pleasant. I think that only in the following one will we clarify the doubts previously left in the previous chapter.
In any case the episode was very good, and I think I agree with one of the comments, the training is very unconventional, but I think it could work ... "DODGE!" It was fun XD.
10534625
Please remember that our RP Midnight is different from this Midnight. But yes I had to enter a lot of comedy, this story is supposed to be full of jokes and such things. Thank you
Oh, of course I know that, and I like the use of such a simple comedy because due to where I am from, sometimes it is difficult for me to read fics that have some too elaborate comedy either because they have some references that I don't understand or because you have a particular use to refer to something and I don't understand it.
In any case I know and a very good chapter.
10534651
thank you
10534482
Always. 😇
10534719
if you have any ideas, drop by to say them. I'll begin creating chapter 4 soon
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So, we predict that Midnight was given a really vague version of The Talk in which he comprehended none of it on an emotional level, but a more interesting question is if he's simply asexual or something else that's not conducive for arousal during the most sexually tense month of the year...
10534734
Hmm Interesting Theories! But perhaps later down in the line you might find others that fit better than the rest.
What's your personal opinion?
10534744
Depends on the direction of the fic. Personally we think there's an underlying issue with brain development that caused a misalignment that caused a cascade of small changes over the years in comparison to the standard pony.
Alternatives include he's a damaged changeling with a geis, an alien (trans dimensional or otherwise), displaced, or Displaced. (yes there's a difference).
10534753
hmm... interesting ideas...
10534480
Naw, I don’t think my brain is stable enough for that.
I don’t think I’ve ever seen the first type of annoying.
It would probably be better to put determined to avoid confusion.
10534881
alright. i'll do that
10534886
Yea, because having the word excitement in this kind of story would cause some confusion.
10535630
welp I changed it thank you
10536216
Your welcome
cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/735737261852721183/778482091217911888/runkidv2.png god RUN ! p.s. i'm thinking of animation a bit of your story am i allowed to ?
10537633
if you want to. not going to stop you
Nice chapter, poor Gallus!
10540510
"So Midnight, what are we going to d-"
"DODGE!"
10537633
Hello there again!
10534753
Hello!
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10534651
You know the story is good when you question your life choices midway through reading it
10870257
oof
Plot twist: Lunchmare is her name.
(It really helped her to get this job, by the way.)
Edit: Or not...
And here I thought an ongoing guard would be on guard...
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Source.
Except he can. He is a royal guard now, and she is technically "attacking" a royal guard facility.
Not that he would ever manage to catch her, but still...
10900572
Good comment!
Loved the picture.