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I'm curious as to how your MC will conquer Equestria, as well as potentially corrupting the Elements of Harmony(if this is pre-Season 1 or in the middle of it) and their sisters to his side.
The council is going to watch your progress with interest. You have our attention.
Well this sounds like an interesting story, love ponies in suits, I can't wait to see how the Equestrian underworld looks like and how silly it might be, are they actually violent or just deal with contraband sweets? I wonder if we will see some of Daring Do's antagonists like Doctor Cabularon and his thugs I would guess they would fit right in. I wonder how will be taking charge as his legal guardian? Fluttershy could be an interesting choice, but the idea of AJ constantly cleaning his mouth with soap and and trying to keep him in the strait an narrow could be funny to see. Still I wonder how he became friends with the CMC. Was his personality the same when he was human was he a criminal even back then? I would have though that the name Cold Blood might be a better fitting name for him, ho well.
Also if you are looking to commission your very own cover art you can look me up, I love drawing ponies in outfits like that. here is my DA gallery if you want to take a look and and here is my YouTube Channel if you want to see my work process. I hope to hear from you soon and good luck on your story.
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Glad you like it so far. However, I have to tell you that the part with him meeting up with that gangster is actually close to the end of the story. I just didn't want to spoil the end, so I took a scene from about two or three chapters earlier.
Still, you can look forward to him making use of every absurdity I can find for him to make use of and, of course, the CMC will also play a role.
Finally, someone that wants to dominate Equestria like me.š
It's probably just me, but that opening scene felt like something that would happen in Doctor Who.
I haven't watched Doctor Who for sometime so I may be wrong.
He arrives and his first thought is to conquer
Conquer how exactly he's not planning to kill any innocent lives or commits severe cruelty is he?
Might want to get an editor to help out. Not a good sign to spot grammar issues less than ten words into a fic.
this is me if I get displaced
A fun start. I found the conclusion of his situation a bit strange. It felt like he got things right a bit too fast and accepted them too easily. Not that it mattered in the end. I am interested to see how this story goes. A smut foalcon story that drags on longer is more rare. Especially combined with one about someone trying to conquer it all. In short this is a neat concept of a villain with foalcon focus, so I have high hopes for this.![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
Well then..... a surprising start surely, but a welcome one. This gon be good.
I wanted to read this but the quotation style really throw me off
So step 1: Find Ponyville
step 2: ...
step 3: Conquer Equestria