Ooooh! So they're not just fanatics that call her Empress. It's her title in this universe. I'm also now curious if Twilight Sparkle/Dusk Shine has a role in this world.
I do want to say, this felt like an oddly filler chapter. Not a lot of substance. We get the impression that Celestia and her inquisition type people are feared, but the last chapter did a good job of that too. Would have gladly waited for a longer chapter with more substance.
I fucking hate fanatics like these inquisitors. I find it so unlikely that Tia would want anypony like that with authority in her guard. I'm worried how this is going to go. We have a theory that 1000 years ago she wiped out the Lunar clans, and the kingdom of Love, all because she felt threatened by her sisters' supposedly greater level of admiration than her own. I'm wary, rarely do dictator Celestia first do well
"Whew. Good. Now that the workaholic nutjobs are out of the room, tea? Crumpets? A stallion professional tongue masseur to relax you? After all the troubles, I heard from Lieutenant White Out that one of my guards is in a bad way, and I wanted to see what I could do to help."
Or, at least that's how I imagine a good bait and switch would go...
"Oh, the amulet they were trying to steal? You mean you haven't taken it out of my armor's secret pouch yet? ...Of course it's there! Where else could I put it where they wouldn't find it?"
You got dis, Gleam. Tell her you think there might be someone on the inside, too.
I want to punt Daisy Chain like a football
Ooooh! So they're not just fanatics that call her Empress. It's her title in this universe. I'm also now curious if Twilight Sparkle/Dusk Shine has a role in this world.
I do want to say, this felt like an oddly filler chapter. Not a lot of substance. We get the impression that Celestia and her inquisition type people are feared, but the last chapter did a good job of that too. Would have gladly waited for a longer chapter with more substance.
Let me guess, this Celestia is not going to be a kind, Celestia.
Methinks she will throw the hood off and be the kind an caring Celestia from Canon
Me also think that's dumb and that Empress Celestia reigns supreme
I agree with 10586412. You're such a tease.
I tought for a moment that it was Dawnbreaker rather than Celestia lol
And yeah this chapter feels more like chapter 17.5 rather than a chapter on its own
Such an intrigue... You are driving me crazy!
Glossy black fur and green magic. Either a red herring or Chrissy got Tia replaced a LONG time ago. Before Cadence got banished long...
Fuck you Daisy
Am i the only one getting the "Emperor of Mankind" kinda vibes?
This is some excellent buildup!
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I've got "Celestia's got to wrangle in her fanatics" vibe going on.
Or Celestia just went full despot. Who knows.
I had to stop reading this chapter, it fucking dragged.
I like the worldbuilding in this chapter. Others may consider it filler, but to me it fills in the world
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"Lorgar is that you?"
This had me heart pumping from the build up hype.
She is calling her to the private chambers?
That is either very good or very bad...
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But not in a bad way.
I fucking hate fanatics like these inquisitors. I find it so unlikely that Tia would want anypony like that with authority in her guard. I'm worried how this is going to go. We have a theory that 1000 years ago she wiped out the Lunar clans, and the kingdom of Love, all because she felt threatened by her sisters' supposedly greater level of admiration than her own. I'm wary, rarely do dictator Celestia first do well
"Guards! Begone!"
The guards beget themselves gone.
"Whew. Good. Now that the workaholic nutjobs are out of the room, tea? Crumpets? A stallion professional tongue masseur to relax you? After all the troubles, I heard from Lieutenant White Out that one of my guards is in a bad way, and I wanted to see what I could do to help."
Or, at least that's how I imagine a good bait and switch would go...
More soon!!
Hello......are you still alive?
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I think they're just busy with stuff. After all, it seems it does take them a whilte to publish stuff
Empress. Not Princess?
Hm... this doesn't bode well...
Hello and when are you going to continue the story???
"Oh, the amulet they were trying to steal? You mean you haven't taken it out of my armor's secret pouch yet? ...Of course it's there! Where else could I put it where they wouldn't find it?"
You got dis, Gleam. Tell her you think there might be someone on the inside, too.
I hope this continues at some point. It's good.
Whew, I hope this is alive, what a great story!
The author has not logged in at all this year... seems like this story died.
I hope he ain't dead, but I don't think this story is gonna get finished sadly :(
This story Is really dead now, wich Is sad cuz its really good!
Oh well
Sooo... is this fic dead Orr...
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May be since Mous has been gone since Dec 19th, 2020
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fuck me iguess cuz this was my first story that i was reading on fimfiction
welp at least i got to enjoy the story as unfinished as it is
Sadness... Another great fic dead
Hello?
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