Still entertaining! Keep up the good work and expectation subversion; you know how to use it well. Could do with a bit more world building though. Story progression is also a little bit slow but I'm guessing that's about to change.
“No, the only thing I’m responsible for placing an itsy bitsy teenie weenie little enchantment on all of the mares.” Gleaming stiffened. “Cadance,” she growled. “What… did you do?” “Nothing,” the she-demon tittered. “Nothing at all!”
I hope Cadence can help Gleaming patch her relation with Twilight, fighting with your younger sister is the worst
The royal guard, huh? I wonder if it has anything to do with Cadence's magic, if Celestia REALLY didn't like her for some reason other than jealousy. Like she being the fallen one herself...
Still entertaining! Keep up the good work and expectation subversion; you know how to use it well. Could do with a bit more world building though. Story progression is also a little bit slow but I'm guessing that's about to change.
FBI OPEN UP
They know run to Anon arms
And now we have to wait for the next chapter.
*Inhales Deeply*
CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!
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quick use reverse psycoligy
Oh dear lord. I have a feeling I know where this is going. Hopefully I'm wrong.
Very nice to hear about the neighbors, though!
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This one right here Officer
>Chapter conclusion
Oh, shit.
Finally! Been waiting on an update to this story for what feels like forever!
I kid, but seriously, I am super happy to see an update. This has to be one of my favorite stories on here
This was a cute chapter,I wonder what the RG want . oh no cliffhanger.
Oh shit an update hell yeah
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They want to reenact the 'FBI OPEN UP' meme
Oh boy.
Muffled scream from upstairs might imply they are up there, too. Meaning this is a wide net being cast, and there is no direct suspicion on Gleaming.
Yet. I have a feeling that'll change in the near future...
Which one fits better?
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Source.
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Source.
Gleaming: "You do know I'm Royal Guard too, right?"
I hope Cadence can help Gleaming patch her relation with Twilight, fighting with your younger sister is the worst
The royal guard, huh? I wonder if it has anything to do with Cadence's magic, if Celestia REALLY didn't like her for some reason other than jealousy. Like she being the fallen one herself...
Happy to see this updated
Hoo boy
Good morning, officer. What can I do for you?
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"Hoo boy" indeed.