OH! What a twist

Damned cliffhangers! They make fluttershy (best pony) cry.

I wan't more

Great twist on the sister keep the storie going I'm loveing it.

YAY!!! TWILIGHT IS EIGHTH BEST PONY!!!

Wow, this chapter is really getting more intense by each chapter. First with Luna betraying Proteus, revelation of the hybrid queen, and the recent actions of Luna. Things are looking dark ahead, and I can't wait to see more.

By the way, I can see how the Queen have such a strong affection for Proteus (you devil ), and can't wait for the revealment of why. Anyhow keep the good work man, you are doing really good

Best regards

Dude this is awesome. It actually got me mad at Luna. Need MOAR

Just realized something. I may be wrong on this, but there is some good but subtle evidence in this story.
The changeling queen, Proteus' sister, is the one that kissed him when he was little. I mean, "she seemed oddly familiar," and the fact that she already knows who he is, and is already trying to get sexually involved with him? Surely I'm not the first to think of this. There's stronger evidence too, but I'm doing homework right now, and need to get back to it.

Cant wait for the next chapter

LUNA YOU FUCKING LIAR!
She is still my favourite pony

Proteus is going to bucking kill Luna.
Luna will have to order his execution to cover her lies.