Great chapter, this is just beginning of Princess Luna liking him but the problem would be. Does Princess Luna likes him because he looks like his father or for who and what Proteus is?
Would be there any changeling involved in this story? It would be neat if Proteus learns the whole, truthful story about his father and Queen Chryaslis.
I see big improvement compare to first story. First time when i think about that story it was "ughh it will be boring " but i must say, damn wrong i was.
Hugely different tone from the first story, which had a darker, tragic theme. This has a more lighthearted style, and includes a lot of the things you see at the beginning of a more realistic romance. I like both, but for very different reasons.
Nice chapter, quite the development on Proteus part. can't wait to see more, keep up the good work man
Great chapter, this is just beginning of Princess Luna liking him but the problem would be. Does Princess Luna likes him because he looks like his father or for who and what Proteus is?
Would be there any changeling involved in this story? It would be neat if Proteus learns the whole, truthful story about his father and Queen Chryaslis.
Loved this chapter was honestly getting nervouse this storie died no update in a while ow well that's life hope you keep going with it;)
1191451 It's definitely going to get finished.
I'll try to bring in the other chapters every four or five days.
1191470 awesome thanks for the heads up I appreciate it.
He is so going to get something very interesting when all this is over.
HE IS GOING TO GET RAPED!
jk
BUT SERIOUSLY!
^ pretty much what i though when she watched him like that.....
anyhow really enjoying the story.
I see big improvement compare to first story. First time when i think about that story it was "ughh it will be boring " but i must say, damn wrong i was.
Keep it up
Hugely different tone from the first story, which had a darker, tragic theme. This has a more lighthearted style, and includes a lot of the things you see at the beginning of a more realistic romance. I like both, but for very different reasons.
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Someone's impatient
Poor Spike, constantly waking up in the dead of the night (I hate that phrase) to burp out a letter. Poor guy
Despite being drunk? I think it's supposed to be "with help from the liquid courage"