I just finished reading this chapter, its started off with nice pace for a story. I enjoyed reading the orginal story and can't wait to see how this goes one. Keep up the good work man
Ah, excellent. I'm glad to see the events of the first tale tie in so well with this one; the treatment of Proteus is understandable and rather sad. Lovin' this.
Really glad you suggested this, as I'm fucking loving it so far. However, I would suggest either finding an editor or going through and fixing some of the mistakes yourself.
Other than that, I really do enjoy it! I can already smell another abridged story!
You caught me getting to ready to go to sleep. This has been added to the top of my read later pile.
Hunter C. Creed
I just finished reading this chapter, its started off with nice pace for a story. I enjoyed reading the orginal story and can't wait to see how this goes one. Keep up the good work man
Ah, excellent. I'm glad to see the events of the first tale tie in so well with this one; the treatment of Proteus is understandable and rather sad. Lovin' this.
Wait... THIS HAS SAD ON IT... I shall watch this with apprehension of a possible sad ending...
Yessss, instant fav!
YEEEEEEEES a new story !!! great first chapter will be looking forward to the update !
yay awesome
damn and i thought ponies were a tolerent race jk
anyways all in allgreat story so far
Really glad you suggested this, as I'm fucking loving it so far. However, I would suggest either finding an editor or going through and fixing some of the mistakes yourself.
Other than that, I really do enjoy it! I can already smell another abridged story!
I'm liking it already!