Ahhh, now i understand. Though this was going into a bizarre direction there for a second.

Haram and Harem are not the same thing, OP.

Oh boy I hope this is not only mares, I want to see how well a cat lady or a cowlady fair in this experiment.

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I support this train of thought.

Now we wait, I want to see 'defeat' luna and celestia with his now "magic dong".

Yo, celestia and Luna, that would be awesome

I already feel my will to continue reading this fic die

This feels kinda like wish fulfillment. Like you're just writing the exciting parts without any buildup. I dont feel very invested in the plot. If you were just trying to write a light, fluffy, wish fulfillment type story then you did well. To be clear, I'm not trying to denigrate your fic, I just calls em likes I sees em. As it stands I enjoy it as light reading. Kinda relaxing to have such a simple and unburdened plot. Although those last 2 chapters have maybe a little too much contrivance.

herding is disloyal and gay. you should feel bad, anon

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Say you, the fag.

You just sit there, jaw dropped. Here he was, listening to his marefriend, having been asked to have at least FIVE other females, MINIMUM! DOSE NOT COMPUTE! What is the catch?!?

The fact that I can understand his dilemma is concerning