Very well written panic attack, so far this story is amazing

Sorry, I got side track did he pass out or was he like frozen in place with a thousand mile stare into the distant?

I am honestly amazed that out of the MANY different stories I have read, not being able to be sent home because earth is magic resistant hasn't been used before.
(If you HAVE read a story that did use that explanation, good for you! I haven't.)

“… Twilight, I have some things that I must do to make myself feel right. One of those things is owning my own home and not relying on the kindness of my friends all the time. I also want to get stronger, strong enough to protect that which I value. I can think about the rest later.”

Very mature way of speaking. This is what i like reading here.

Everything is going too fast. I'm not sure I'm interested with this story anymore.

Huh. Would have thought that was a foregone conclusion.