Yay thnx for re-releasing these chapters i loved them. I look forward to your next chapter or batch of chapters. I hope this doesn't lead to war, but based on what i just read and some of the tags the story has i worry about the changlings and Anon. I see things getting worse before getting better.
10372795 I mean its not allowed in my country either but had the chance to eat it while on board a cargo ship its not bad actually its pretty sweet meat
10373678 Thanks! I originally wrote this for myself without thinking of publishing. Currently rewriting a couple of parts of chapters that are not Fimfiction friendly.
This is another great chapter, I think what I like the most is how its exactly the way people really do think and behave.
I cant tell you how many upper managers couldn't use critical and reasonable judgement if their very life depended on it.
I really hope this human has a few safeguards in place.
Also 10 points to the Author for an intelligent character. We've had far too many "Too dense to breath" lead characters here lately. This makes a much needed and refreshing change.
The Monk “On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments
10374408 Wait, foal con gets through? Not that I'd touch that, but wow. Also: Rules > Stories > Don’t Post (Content) > one of those is the big reason and it changes several scenes that I am passionate about (non gore/sexual reason)
10367130
Ha! Thanks!
10366939
YES! And thanks so much!
10367266
Thanks so much!
Would any pony be able to admit to witnessing such a thing if they did?
Yay thnx for re-releasing these chapters i loved them. I look forward to your next chapter or batch of chapters. I hope this doesn't lead to war, but based on what i just read and some of the tags the story has i worry about the changlings and Anon. I see things getting worse before getting better.
Great chapter!
Does Anon know of Fluttershy’s friendship with Discord? If not, than the Peace Talks may fail if he Chooses to step foot into her cottage.
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I mean its not allowed in my country either but had the chance to eat it while on board a cargo ship its not bad actually its pretty sweet meat
10372883
Oh. That sounds so much better in context.
Good story. I look forward to another chapter. I'll be following this.
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Thanks!
Can't wait for the next chapter and how discord will be used in this story. Also great read really leaves you wanting for more.
10373678
Thanks! I originally wrote this for myself without thinking of publishing. Currently rewriting a couple of parts of chapters that are not Fimfiction friendly.
10373683
Think you'd be willing to share those another way? Maybe through email?
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PM me an Email address asking for it, and I'll send them to you when I publish the next chapters.
^Open invite to anyone
10373779
You do realize that Fimfiction publishes stories of extreme violence and bizarre sexual acts including foal con and non consent.
Are you sure its wise to ask an author to send you content that even fimfiction is uncomfortable with?
That sounds like an incredibly bad idea to me.
The Monk
This is another great chapter,
I think what I like the most is how its exactly the way people really do think and behave.
I cant tell you how many upper managers couldn't use critical and reasonable judgement if their very life depended on it.
I really hope this human has a few safeguards in place.
Also 10 points to the Author for an intelligent character. We've had far too many "Too dense to breath" lead characters here lately. This makes a much needed and refreshing change.
The Monk
“On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments
10374408
Wait, foal con gets through? Not that I'd touch that, but wow.
Also: Rules > Stories > Don’t Post (Content) > one of those is the big reason and it changes several scenes that I am passionate about (non gore/sexual reason)
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I could be wrong on that. While I am a perv, stuff like that is not my thing, but I have come across some extreme stuff here.
The Monk
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Ah. Not that I judge. I'm not changing anything extreme, just not in the rules
10374408
Yes, I am willing and ready.
Looks like its all to happen soon hopefully it going s wall