"That's fine with me, but please promise me that you won't use levitation on the bullets until they have been destroyed. they are activated by kinetics, and I don't know if levitation will send a lethal object in a random direction. If such a projectile does not completely penetrate a body, it will definitely bounce back and cause more damage."
While I despise that dense main character thats all too common here, your character is in danger of becoming the opposite extreme. That obnoxious know-it-all that we all knew in high school that no-body liked, and we all wished would just shut up and sit down. Try not to make your character explain EVERYTHING to the other characters, it comes across as talking down to them. He also seems to act like he is the smartest person in the room.
Not good if you want people to like your character and even more important, empathize with him.
I am so happy everything went will.
While I despise that dense main character thats all too common here, your character is in danger of becoming the opposite extreme. That obnoxious know-it-all that we all knew in high school that no-body liked, and we all wished would just shut up and sit down. Try not to make your character explain EVERYTHING to the other characters, it comes across as talking down to them. He also seems to act like he is the smartest person in the room.
Not good if you want people to like your character and even more important, empathize with him.
The Monk
Yes, yes, we understand how much of a saint your self-insert is. It won't make girls like you.
10505863
Is that the sole purpose for me writing this story that is bouncing around in my head???
10508522
Dont listen to that scum the story is great