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this is good, please continue :heart: :twilightsmile:

HA he showed her our entire species warfare history NICE!
amazing so far proceed!

I like it! Another! *Hits Next*

Yeah, Clop fics are great and all... but have you ever read an MLP isekai with geopolitical intrigue? (10/10 so far! Keep it up!)

Great story so far!

Did Luna saw images/footage of “giant mushroom shaped explosions”?

Is the human going to inform Chrysalis of Luna being in his dream?

This was wonderfully different. I particularly enjoyed the portrayal of the human mind.

Personally I think Luna is a diltz, She is in an alien mind and making assumptions like a foal about a creature the likes of which they have never seen.

Very well done.

The Monk
“Her hands were still bound with rope, she debated an escape before all the stupidity gave her an aneurysm.” -Scarheart

What happened to the update? I could have sworn there was like 5 new chapters...

I’ve read Chapters 3-5 (great chapters by the way), but Chapters 6-7 are no longer there. Is there something going on?

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Sorry. Got overzealous with updates after finalizing and I should really look them over one more time before publishing.

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Thanks so much!

Would any pony be able to admit to witnessing such a thing if they did?

Yay thnx for re-releasing these chapters i loved them. I look forward to your next chapter or batch of chapters. I hope this doesn't lead to war, but based on what i just read and some of the tags the story has i worry about the changlings and Anon. I see things getting worse before getting better.

Great chapter!

Does Anon know of Fluttershy’s friendship with Discord? If not, than the Peace Talks may fail if he Chooses to step foot into her cottage.

well there is canned horse meat...but never mind
nice chapter

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I mean its not allowed in my country either but had the chance to eat it while on board a cargo ship its not bad actually its pretty sweet meat

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Oh. That sounds so much better in context.

Good story. I look forward to another chapter. I'll be following this.

Can't wait for the next chapter and how discord will be used in this story. Also great read really leaves you wanting for more.

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Thanks! I originally wrote this for myself without thinking of publishing. Currently rewriting a couple of parts of chapters that are not Fimfiction friendly.

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Think you'd be willing to share those another way? Maybe through email?

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PM me an Email address asking for it, and I'll send them to you when I publish the next chapters.
^Open invite to anyone

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chapters that are not Fimfiction friendly

You do realize that Fimfiction publishes stories of extreme violence and bizarre sexual acts including foal con and non consent.

Are you sure its wise to ask an author to send you content that even fimfiction is uncomfortable with?

That sounds like an incredibly bad idea to me.

The Monk

“Hundreds of years,” Reflection muttered, enjoying the scratching. “That’s a lot of porn.” - Dropbear

This is another great chapter,
I think what I like the most is how its exactly the way people really do think and behave.

I cant tell you how many upper managers couldn't use critical and reasonable judgement if their very life depended on it.

I really hope this human has a few safeguards in place.

Also 10 points to the Author for an intelligent character. We've had far too many "Too dense to breath" lead characters here lately. This makes a much needed and refreshing change.

The Monk
“On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments

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Wait, foal con gets through? Not that I'd touch that, but wow.
Also: Rules > Stories > Don’t Post (Content) > one of those is the big reason and it changes several scenes that I am passionate about (non gore/sexual reason)

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I could be wrong on that. While I am a perv, stuff like that is not my thing, but I have come across some extreme stuff here.

The Monk

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Ah. Not that I judge. I'm not changing anything extreme, just not in the rules

Chapters 8-14 were great!

The rest of the reports were details of the four pony races: Earth Pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, and Changeling.

*sad bat pony noise*

"Show us the Human race; What their origin is, and how have they come to be in the modern time."

How about No.

Way to invasive for me.

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Ye dare seek to hide the details thine ancestry's legacy? And to thine own self no less! Such insolence shall be paid for ten-fold! Now lay bare the truth of thine own nature for the world to witness!

“Thank you, Princess. I apologize for my own response. I don’t like resorting to such outbursts of aggression, but I think ad homonym is the one thing that gets under my skin so can it be understood from now on that such is my stance on the topic?”

Hominem. a homonym is a word that shares a pronunciation with another word, but both words do not share definitions.

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This is what I get for writing alone. Corrected. Thanks!

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Yeah I get it. I miss things like that as well sometimes.

Ok this his my interest I can't wait to see where this goes.

This was a wild heart pumping chapter look's like saw the true danger's of earth I hope they can make peace..

Zecora is awesome I'm happy she didn't snitch on them .

This Anon is awesome and has my respect. I hope he finds a way to share love.

This was a interesting lore chapter
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I hope he learns about bat pony next.

This was a sweet and heart warming chapter

Looks like its all to happen soon hopefully it going s wall

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