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Thank you for your kind comment I hope you continue to like my story as Celestia and Chrysalis engage on their journey.
A really good start on this, it will be interesting to see how the dynamic between chrys and Celly will develop
I really look forward to more of this story.
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It will be extremely rocky, at least at first, but it will be a marathon, not a sprint
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More will be forthcoming, Updates will be weekly, promise!
Really look forward to more of this. Good first chapter.
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Thank you! I really hope you continue to like it as the relationship develops.
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I hope so too. I like the idea of them being together a lot.
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As do I. I've seen them paired before, this is my (realistic) take on it.
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Good luck.
Can’t wait to read more.
Awesome can't wait to read more
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Thank you for that, I'll need it I think.
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The story will be updated weekly, and the journey will continue.
Interesting beginning, I'm in.
Also, if Luna and Tavi are a thing, does that mean this is the same universe as your Wildfire stories?
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This is set in the Wilyverse, but it's not connected to anything as yet, as it's in the past, before Wildfire was born.
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Cool. It's a fun AU, I'm excited to see more.
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It's only tagged as AU because it differs from the events of the show.
Oh this is interesting I’ll follow this
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Thank you! Updates are weekly on Fridays
“Coronation, Chrysalis? This is bad comedy!”
Interesting although the emotional development in the latter half is a little inconsistent. Eager to see more though!
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* giggles*
Yes there were references to that movie in there, and well spotted for finding it. Although I feel justified as both are Hasbro properties.
Seems promising. Interested where this is going.
> “No more petitioners lobbying to reduce the carbon hoof print of the ethnically diverse disability access policy for single parent mothers.”
Every chrysalis fag ends up being so based.
She lets Thorax take care of hive defences for a week and this is what happens.
Luna and Octavia.
Vinyl: WHAT?!
Vinyl runs off after Luna: HOOVES OFF MY WAIFU PRINCESS LUNA! She’s MINE!
it had to be done. I don’t mind Tavi being with Luna, but octiscratch for the win.
Yeah...I’m pretty sure computers are still maybe...at least fifty years away for Equestria.
The story could stand a bit less of this... neckbeard cool James Bond stuff.
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Reading on further, it's just a mess. The interaction between the Sisters, prescient letter sending, the whole... Daring Do nonsense as a viable argument people took seriously... I'm sure it all somehow levels up since this is all just window dressing for the dramatic cloppy stuff later on, but this is so painful to read.
What is this? What kind of 'salvation' did Chrysalis expect, if she's so well-informed about ponies as to know Sunset ran off years ago? And what is this argument, when ponies at large are content with Celestia and her current student venerates her? Celestia starts off genuinely wanting all of them dead, being quite nonchalant about it, and Twilight is apparently significantly worse and more volatile. What kind of help in any sane world would they provide, but a last meal and a swift painless execution? Not that bad of an option, of course, but this isn't what is discussed. And every other paragraph is like this.
Sounds like another very, very interesting story for the future. I would love to read a story about Celestia and Sunset and their Mother-Daughter/Estranged bond both before and after the mirror.
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Id say centuries considering they only know basic gunpowder equipment, I.E fireworks.
come on! this chysalis is already half-way reformed. what's the fun in that?
first-half of this chapter get my hope up for nothing.