I may not be a huge fan, but I like the Horror Genre. And even LIKE the Horror Villains/Killers/Monsters to win sometimes. And since it's the Halloween Season, it's perfect. 😈 👹 💀 🎃
10507101 Yes, quite right. Through I do think at least a year or two should have passed since chapter 3 or something. Because Trixie didn't come back until season 3, episode 5: Magic Duel. This could of been a darker version of that episode (no alicorn amulet needed).
10507583 Well, besides from the rock farm job, you could have her done other stuff in building up a reputation in the criminal underworld or whatever. Because Trixie wasn't seen in the show until Season 3. That would've allow ya to come up with all sort of behind the scenes type story and what not. Especially since this is an AU fic.
Well, regardless. This is good either way. Just look out for any story opportunities and pace between Trixie's targets. She got Rarity and Sweetie Belle, now show the aftermath and show the mane 6 and the Ponyville townsfolk reaction from it. It's up to you.
10507699 A thrilling fourth chapter for October? Perfect. I initially thought that Trixie would kill Rarity because of what she did, but I have to admit, you pleasantly surprised me. Please continue this story. I absolutely love it so far.
Damn! I guess Trixie give the "Eye for an Eye" Concept of Revenge against Rarity. But, Rarity lost BOTH of her Eyes, and Sweetie Belle.
In Very Cruel Irony, Rarity knows Trixie's own pain of losing a Young Sibling.
And now the Mane Six's Bad Days have arrived.
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Tyrian: Eeeeeeeeeye for an eeeeeeeeeeye. *insane laughter*
Cupcakes Pinkie Pie: . . . I need to go home and rethink my life.
Factory Rainbow Dash: Me too.
Muffins Derpy: Same.
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I may not be a huge fan, but I like the Horror Genre. And even LIKE the Horror Villains/Killers/Monsters to win sometimes. And since it's the Halloween Season, it's perfect. 😈 👹 💀 🎃
Here comes judgment day.
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Shit I came back to finish the chapter. And it ended withThat. Damn.
It would be interesting to see the consquences for her action...
For Rarity that is.
Ps. It would be really cool of there was like? The after math for all the characters?
Would the princess think of this?
The former nightmare moon?
Hmmm? More then likely in her past shes killed a few ponys?
I wonder if trixie will get the sane leniency.
Finanlly, mlp if your look at even on the side. Is actually very very dark. Thank you for making this a reality.
Justice or revenge should be had.
Interesting reinterpretation of classical "Death in the family"...
Well, damn.... You actual kill poor Sweetie Belle too. Didn't expected that one. Good show.
You got what you fucking deserve, Rarity.
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That's nothing. Wait until you see what I've got planned for the Apple family.
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Yes, quite right. Through I do think at least a year or two should have passed since chapter 3 or something. Because Trixie didn't come back until season 3, episode 5: Magic Duel. This could of been a darker version of that episode (no alicorn amulet needed).
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And what do you think she could have done for 1 or 2 years?
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Well, besides from the rock farm job, you could have her done other stuff in building up a reputation in the criminal underworld or whatever. Because Trixie wasn't seen in the show until Season 3. That would've allow ya to come up with all sort of behind the scenes type story and what not. Especially since this is an AU fic.
Well, regardless. This is good either way. Just look out for any story opportunities and pace between Trixie's targets. She got Rarity and Sweetie Belle, now show the aftermath and show the mane 6 and the Ponyville townsfolk reaction from it. It's up to you.
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I'll be sure to keep your advice in mind.
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Right'o.
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A thrilling fourth chapter for October? Perfect. I initially thought that Trixie would kill Rarity because of what she did, but I have to admit, you pleasantly surprised me. Please continue this story. I absolutely love it so far.
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Will do
Your review.
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Thank you so much.