It happened!! And the story is still marked incomplete! I can't wait to see where this goes and what the state of everything is going to be at the start of Dead by Midnight.
Had a feeling Blight was gonna be Rainbows after his release, great work with this one, I love the interaction between the Entity and People, the way you've done the Entity is real good. Where you going for Legion before Blight release for RD? Or you got plans for that killer....maybe a certain group of girls that have become hopeless?
10436354 There will be an epilogue incoming. 10436360 I do have plans for Legion, and my original idea was to make Dash the Plague. 10436364 Yeah, when I saw the trailers early on, I definitely had a change of plans because it was perfect.
"as she hangs limply from, her lamplight" Missing word(s) after the "from"?
"The haft of a long, cane capped with" "The haft of a long cane capped with"?
"as I step away from the office" It looks, from later events, like she actually exits the station entirely at about this point? That tripped me up a bit, though, as I didn't interpret this as that (merely stepping further away from the door while remaining in the lobby) and then got confused and had to check back; I thought you might want to know.
Well, good to know everything is just fine! :D Deeefinitely just fine... (I enjoyed the chapter, though. :D)
10437308 I think she already ended him and his cronies, tbh. I mean, I would've loved to have seen it in full, gory detail, but....well....let's see what happens next, shall we?
Oh Rainbow no...
10436093
Yeah the ending of this story is bittersweet. Because it’s not the end. Dead by Midnight is.
nice work
Rainbow...
It happened!! And the story is still marked incomplete! I can't wait to see where this goes and what the state of everything is going to be at the start of Dead by Midnight.
Had a feeling Blight was gonna be Rainbows after his release, great work with this one, I love the interaction between the Entity and People, the way you've done the Entity is real good.
Where you going for Legion before Blight release for RD? Or you got plans for that killer....maybe a certain group of girls that have become hopeless?
I had a sneaky feeling you’d make Dash the blight after the teasers dropped, they’re a good match.
Is Rainbow going to do what I think she's going to do?
10436354
There will be an epilogue incoming.
10436360
I do have plans for Legion, and my original idea was to make Dash the Plague.
10436364
Yeah, when I saw the trailers early on, I definitely had a change of plans because it was perfect.
10429170 Yeah. Me.
10436107 Dead by Midnight being the next story in the series, I'm taking it?
10436400 Good to know.
10436385 Probably.
10436400
>Incoming epilogue
Aww.
Well, appropriate.
Plus you know when to end things with us wanting more!
I thought Sunset said something killed the Entity.
Does this mean Dash will also retain her powers afterwards?
O h
10436107
is the prologue
No fucking way! Rainbows going to become the Blight!? I hope her first victim is dead drug lord wannabe Chase!
Alright Rainbow. I can follow your line of thinking. Now let's see how far you take it.
"as she hangs limply from, her lamplight"
Missing word(s) after the "from"?
"The haft of a long, cane capped with"
"The haft of a long cane capped with"?
"as I step away from the office"
It looks, from later events, like she actually exits the station entirely at about this point? That tripped me up a bit, though, as I didn't interpret this as that (merely stepping further away from the door while remaining in the lobby) and then got confused and had to check back; I thought you might want to know.
Well, good to know everything is just fine! :D
Deeefinitely just fine...
(I enjoyed the chapter, though. :D)
Poor Rainbow, she just can't give herself a break.
Holy fuck i love this story i binged it and can't wait for the next part. Great job :)
10437308
I think she already ended him and his cronies, tbh. I mean, I would've loved to have seen it in full, gory detail, but....well....let's see what happens next, shall we?