Back inside Stable 4, I was destined for greatness. Outside, I was nothing more than a filly. At the same time, I also seemed to fit in very well into the horribly violent Equestrian wasteland, more than you would expect from somepony my age.
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Wait, why didn't Candy ask how Iron got hurt? If someone you cared deeply about suddenly gained inexplicable injuries, wouldn't you immediately want to know what happened?
Well, that's one bit I've been waiting for - the talk. (And now I'm pretty sure Iron's asexual.)
So as hinted before, Stable 4's top spot goes to the richest?
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Yeah, that's indeed how Stable 4 operates. In practice it's a little bit more complicated, but I didn't want to spend 5000 words explaining the inner politics of a stable in a single chapter.
As for Iron's sexuality… I'm not really fond of putting characters and people into well-defined boxes like that. Although you'd be correct that, at least currently in the story, she is not interested in any form of sexual activity.
Fun chapter, it felt like a real adventure. I don't get why those two would attack at the end but whatever, at least there is no law to get in trouble with.
Airwaves seems interesting and the background on the area was as well. Interested to hear more about that ghoul settlement.
I noticed one error, you referred to wine when comparing alcohol at the bar then wrote whiskey "tasted less disgusting than whiskey—and asked" I think you meant wine here.
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Glad you like it! Been a while since I wrote it, but I remember I had fun doing it.
The two attacked because >generic thugs. Had their ego bruised, wanted to take revenge for it, etc. I'll admit I put little to no thought into them since I knew I'd be killing them off. Probably should have given them a bit more thought.
Nope, that's just a pun on "swallow my pride" (I'll admit I completely forgot about it until now)
of course!!! Candy has that effect on our hearts.
Wow, this scene is so splendid!!! I don't know, it happens so fast, I don't know what to feel.
Iron begins to normalize the act "kill".
Candy, at times she's so opposed to Iron but without being contrary.
Candy and Iron, the perfect pair.
This story begins to "feel" like a great adventure, that is dangerous for this grumpy heart, because then he becomes attached without measuring the consequences.
I love your ART, my dude <3
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Thank you! It means a lot to read that
And I gotta agree, the Iron/Candy dynamic is probably one of my favourites in the entire fic.
Call me a weirdo, but I really like all the instances of reasoning & decision making that Iron does throughout the story. Ideas and outcomes that don't feel arbitrary -- something I feel is a little bit rare in other stories.
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Thanks! I put a lot of thought into it, so I'm really glad it doesn't go unappreciated.
I love the more pragmatic view of magic you put in the big book of arcane sciences, that's a really interesting way of representing it
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Thanks. I figured that if ponies are anything like humans, they would manage to come up with mathematical formalisms to express just about anything that can be studied