Back inside Stable 4, I was destined for greatness. Outside, I was nothing more than a filly. At the same time, I also seemed to fit in very well into the horribly violent Equestrian wasteland, more than you would expect from somepony my age.
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Wow... Just wow. Amazing. You managed to completely undermine the most basic premise that set this story apart from so many others, and you did it with a slightly different version of one of the worst tropes in history.
Goodbye.
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Funnily enough, I hate that trope as much as anyone else and thought I did a good enough job at not falling into it. Guess not, heh.
On the flip side, having her kill him would have undermined ~250k words' worth of character development.
Not gonna claim you're wrong about this, though. I get the feeling, but I was just really hoping I'd manage to avoid it.
All the drama in these last two chapters. Well I made it this far so good job. Did feel like it went too fast at parts but it is good that the story progresses rather then being half finished. Also that platogkrone guy just wants to read psycho raider fanfiction. Not really someone right in the head I think.
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Thanks!
Yeah, I need to be careful with the pacing. Needs to be fast because it's close to the end, but it also can't be too fast. It's a balancing act I don't have a lot of experience with, so thanks for bearing with me.
But also, I wouldn't say that about him. I personally really hate that trope, so I understand the underlying opinion. I don't necessarily agree with it, given everything the fic stands for in my eyes, but I do get it.
Welp. I'm glad we're close enough to the end of the story that we don't need to worry about Plat making some table-turning comeback.... Right?
wow, amazing chapter and amazing arc for iron, I also just noticed how close I was to the end of the fic and I really don't want it to end
Someone put this pony in a projection booth, 'cause he's on fire!
Iron, you're too kind.
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I wouldn't call it kindness as much as "I won't let you ruin my life a third time" :P