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Why the Void?
Discord isn't a void dweller, he is a chaos spirit
If Discord is the one transporting to Equestria then it would more fit if it was happening in his mini dimension
Or that could fit if that was a void dweller in disguise and not a real Discord
Why "demand" is used?
If it was on purpose then he deserves to be backstabbed later when it will be profitable a lot
If you have grammar problems, etc use Grammarly
The intro is alright but I feel that it doesn't flow right as a story IMO.
May read the rest later if I feel right.
You might wanna use this down the line for your story:
this chapter feels like a bastardized fusion of a Chess Game of the Gods, Displaced, and Isekai'd chapter and that makes it very disjointed. also please try to fix this chapters grammar. other than that
its very interestingthe concept is neat.