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Who's going to be his love interest
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It doesn't make sense how General Solar could invade his dreams and memories
Even Nightmare Moon couldn't do that and that's her thing, she specializes in it. She like Luna is much better at it from others and she still couldn't do that
What also doesn't make sense is how General could send him a letter by dragon fire
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Too much of repeating of words "special place"
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I think I know how to shorten the travel time for squads
Create a SpaceBridge or GroundBridge first (like from Transformers Prime )
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Or Bifrost (like from MCU)
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But a Bifrost can't be exactly created or destroyed but only summoned
A Bifrost can be Mandalore's personal teleport, gate because he only needs something to call it from, maybe a medallion, crown, ring or by using the force (which would fit more )
Like Heimdall used his sword and Thor Stormbreaker to summon it
A gate that opens a portal to whenever you want
It would be better if it won't run on Equis magic, because probably Equis magic covers and originates from only this planet
"So you know about me. Whatever, it's not really important." She began to attack me with her magic's laser. I dodge it and take my Beskad, like Nightmare Moon I want to only hurt her. As the fight with Nightmare Moon, it was very hard. Even harder than Nightmare Moon's fight. The fight lasted so long we were hurt badly, my armor hides my skin but she succeeds hurt me and you can see blood coming outside the armor. Daybreaker has good wounds like me blood come from her wounds, our breath was loud and hard to retake, this fight needs to end before one of us died.
"So you know about me. Whatever, it's not really important." She began to attack me with her magic's laser. I dodge it and take my Beskad, like Nightmare Moon I want to only hurt her. As the fight with Daybreaker, it was very hard. Even harder than Nightmare Moon's fight. The fight lasted so long we were hurt badly, my armor hides my skin but she succeeds hurt me and you can see blood coming outside the armor. Daybreaker has good wounds like me blood come from her wounds, our breath was loud and hard to retake, this fight needs to end before one of us died.
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Maybe only Chrysalis or Nightmare Moon or Daybreaker. Or maybe the three. I think I will ask for that.
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You are seeing this as if that was a multiplayer video game
If something is op it's being nerfed so everyone is on the same level, etc
But this is a story and especially in stories that want to try to have realistic look, outcomes, rules, etc things can be op and no one cares because its satisfying and fun in a way
You don't see things being nerfed for the sake of it in real life do you?
A tank isn't nerfed to be weak as jeep or something stupid like that
Where is fun when everything is the same?
Where is the fun when the stronger and op is instantly nerfed?
Tring to nerf something strong or op in the story is also making the story predictable and boring.
Idiot Ball trope is one and worst example of trying to nerf characters that are normally smart enough to solve the problem jut to drag the story for the plot
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I want to say, I'm happy to see people support the story but it's normal for some other people to don't love the OP thing. I just want to say I thank you for this explanation but it's not a problem if Mist_Chaser thinks it's a little OP. I'm not really bothered by what he/she thinks, it's important to have a proper thought. Again, you think what you want. It's just what I think.