2020 ahaha did I actually write this comment? Retracted.

1146445
You sir have reached enlightenment.

1146445 It doesn't matter we'll always love you. *Hug*

1146445

I don't see why you're beating yourself up over EverFree. I personally liked the story. The story itself, could be a good premise for something down the line, none clop related.

Truth is, theres only so much you can write clop about. Maybe your at your end. Just know that whatever you do, your loyal readers will suport you on your path.

Now back to writing, or I'll send Slendy after you!

Activate Slenderman Protocall? <Yes> No>

Slenderman Has been sent.

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Oops. Well, you should have that next book up before he catches you. Right?

May you find peace there

Well I like it. I don't mind the concept. My only issue is when shy suddenly turns into a rapist. Hormones don't do that shit. And besides, Twilight makes a better rapist anyway.

This is the 3rd twishy I've read and honestly, it's better than the other 2. Also, if you think it's a good idea to take a break from clop, do it. No matter what story you write, I'm sure all your viewers will support you, clop or no clop.

HHHNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGG!
(In other words, Good clopfic!)

1147210
"There's only so much clop you can write about"
I respectfully disagree.

1146445
As for the story itself, I very much enjoyed it, even though I can tell it feels like it's lacking effort. Sorry to say, but I KNOW you can do better. Regardless of whether or not you choose to write clop or whatever, it shouldn't matter. Write what YOU want to write and put effort into it, that's all I ask of ya

1147373 Yeah. Looking at this, I realize that. I completely forgot everything KitsuneRiku! Thats some... interesting clop.

But yeah! There are a LOT of pairings, and a few haven't been tried yet. Someone! Crystal Pony Clop! ASAP!

1146445 You know what you must do!

1147415 chrystal... clop? ... how the hell???

1146445
To sleepy to read noa
Will read later in the mornin' when I can remember what 'The' means..

MMMMM! Coma time!

1147455

Season three's first episode is about Cadence rules the Crystal Pony Empire or something. Cadence x Crystal Pony OC?

Don't know, whatever you do will be good.

1147373... are you saying... i should go all out? ... as in make one last final flash fan fiction to give my viewers the biggest, hardest and wierdest wingboner they ever had? i... i dont think i'm ready for this...

1147499
Can't tell if spamming ellipses or being super serial.
But no seriously, I only suggested that you do whatever it is that you want to do. I have no idea what that is since I am not you

1147498no, no... i know that... but crystals are hard... spiky, and to top it off, i would need to wait for the episode to make sure i dont mess it up!

Oh god…… I think there's a... spider somewhere in my bed. Aw, who needs sleep?
About the story. Seems legit.

1147513 Well... This IS ponies after all. They talk. You could throw physics out the window and we wouldn't care. And who cares if you get it wrong? You can edit!

1147508 well... i'm so super serial... but thats irrelevant. i think i'm going to write 1-2 shot stories for now while finishing the others. then, i'll consider my options. plus i have to remind myself about my self insert as the alic- WHOOPS... that was close!

1146445 i will have a missing man formation ready when you retire from clop

1147540
You are an odd one.

I like it

The new people are like "GASP". Everyone else is just like "I can clop to this"

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actually, besides the flutterrape part, it's pretty good for an uneditedf

1146445 As long as you write good stories, no one will care. Clop or no clop, we all still love you (Although my favorite by you was The First Unicorn, and it barely had any clop).

1147499 No. I still want you to write more stories. I don't think that one big orgy clopfic will be good for long, and I think that your talents could go toward longer stories. Just IMO, but it's all up to you!

Are you doing this to make me happy?
First tentacles and now futa!
I hardly know what to say, except...
ERMAHGERD!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!

Kind of wish there was more detail, but I guess this ain't your thing either.

Warning about where its going:

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*still keeps reading*

"called for the sperm of a shy mare."

sperm and mare dont mix together bro(at least in that way lol), maybe shy stallion but twilight explain that she doesnt know one so used fluttershy?

Ok later its properly explained so disregard the statement above

Ummmm...

I don't know what to say about this. You get a thumbs up because I was entertained, but I laughed more than I... did other things...

1149859 yeah... me too.

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1154867 see the picture in this comment.1148169

I can't write at all, so anything decent is fine by me.

"I need to turn you into a stallion..."
I've read enough clopfics to know where this is going.
The only advice I have for "losing your touch" is to keep going; put words on paper, even if they make no sense.
Gears can't whirl in your head without making a noise.

1216390 No worries, I feel better than ever now. That was during a weak point. I'm alright now and I'm ready to finish these fics... momentarily, of course.

Loved this, please continue

1263668 I will, it'll be finished soon.

(Please stop reading if you don’t like where this is going)

[0:36]

"You say it like it's a bad thing!"

I like it

(Please stop reading if you don’t like where this is going)
WHY DONT I EVER LISTEN???

MORE

This is crazy clever. Make a sequel or something similar. Really great, read it more than once. Make more, laughed the entire time. Kinda think this is the perfect face for this story, so I will give you 11 of them.

Seriously though, sequel. And you got a follower :)

3483659 I shall put some free time aside to make a part 2.

3483713 Thank ya kindly.

This story reminded me very much of the pony milking game without milk.
1147210 or he should just find all 8 incredibly good drawn warning pages.

What is the status of the second chapter? It has not been updated in over a year. Has the story been abandoned?

4624956 It has not been abandoned. It's just been left alone for a good while. Sorry...

lol ded

6688874
No u.

Fluttershy looked at her friend timidly to ask her, "You had to use me? But, why Twilight? Surely Rainbow would adore having… err, one of these things…"
Twilight blushed slightly and explained further in detail, "Well… the book called for the sperm of a shy, or otherwise timid mare. The type of pony actually didn't matter all that much be it an earth pony, unicorn or pegasus, but you're the only individual that I know who would qualify. The book calls it shy excess substance."

: "Just admit it Twilight: You merely want to see me getting milked by a machine, don't you?"
: "Uhm... Maybe?"

"What if…" Fluttershy began, returning to her original, shy personality. "What if I… you know… cum in you? Will you be alright with that?"
Twilight looked at her friend with a grin, and claimed, "You're actually not producing real cum at all. The substance doesn't have the same characteristics as a real stallion's sperm... So no, I don't mind cream pies one bit!"

: "Are you sure you read the fine print correctly?"