Some say the gods are cruel. But even the gods know some things just aren't deserved.
A full year... I thought for sure this was dead.
updateGlad to have you back madam/sirCan't wait for more
I am sorry you guys. It has been a hell of a year.
Also, I need an editor.
Just putting that out there.
Aaaand Vinyl nearly gets herself executed. Brilliant.
OH GOD!!!! its been so long i forgot i faved this story. (I am reading to much other stories)need to re-read this so in get up to speed
Well. I was not expecting this.
What's this necromancy?
5112138 Strange things happen in October~
Glad to have you back!
It still lives! Now I need to re-read the whole thing
Eh, explicit language was a main point of this chapter, but feels really jarring from the rest of the story.
Excuse me, but since when has Celestia thought of swearing as the worst crime? I otherwise like this story, but I find this scene to be illogical.
Moving on, otherwise a good chapter. Keep up the good work!
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She doesn't consider it the worst crime ever. Using profanity today among civilized people is usually very offensive.
Now Imagine royalty surrounded by the most hoity toity nobles, all of whom are offended by the simplest things.
Granted, Celestial is MUCH better than those ponies but she is still all manners all the time.
And of course this is simply one of my interpretations of her. But I can see what you mean.
Thank you for the comment! I can always use solid, specific criticism to help give the readers a story of quality.
Krysta, this is Vinyl Scratch. She doesn’t speak Equestrian perfectly yet but she is learning.
I like how, from Octavia's perspective, this could apply to either Krysta or Vinyl.
In any case, always good to see more of a seemingly forgotten story. I look forward to more.
Update?
A full year... I thought for sure this was dead.
update
Glad to have you back madam/sir
Can't wait for more
I am sorry you guys. It has been a hell of a year.
Also, I need an editor.
Just putting that out there.
Aaaand Vinyl nearly gets herself executed. Brilliant.
OH GOD!!!! its been so long i forgot i faved this story. (I am reading to much other stories)
need to re-read this so in get up to speed
Well. I was not expecting this.
What's this necromancy?
5112138
Strange things happen in October~
Glad to have you back!
It still lives! Now I need to re-read the whole thing
Eh, explicit language was a main point of this chapter, but feels really jarring from the rest of the story.
Excuse me, but since when has Celestia thought of swearing as the worst crime? I otherwise like this story, but I find this scene to be illogical.
Moving on, otherwise a good chapter. Keep up the good work!
5114023
She doesn't consider it the worst crime ever. Using profanity today among civilized people is usually very offensive.
Now Imagine royalty surrounded by the most hoity toity nobles, all of whom are offended by the simplest things.
Granted, Celestial is MUCH better than those ponies but she is still all manners all the time.
And of course this is simply one of my interpretations of her. But I can see what you mean.
Thank you for the comment! I can always use solid, specific criticism to help give the readers a story of quality.
I like how, from Octavia's perspective, this could apply to either Krysta or Vinyl.
In any case, always good to see more of a seemingly forgotten story. I look forward to more.
Update?