Oh geez, I would be reading this right now if I were not at my parents place for the weekend. To read later.

To be honest I liked the ambiguity of the first two, but I like your stories in general so I will definitely read this.

FIRST!

Oh, and that was AWESOME! moar pls!

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Yeah, this is really an experiment. I was surprised that someone asked, so I wanted to make one. I have considered trying to write clop just once anyway.

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Second, I'm afraid.

There is one other chapter. I'll post it next week.

Boiled alive in chocolate? Now that is a hell of a way to go

I can't clop to this... I'm having t much fun!
I suppose this could indeed be dual use humor/clop. Bondage isn't really my thing though, so I was just snickering while imagining their playacting. Chocolate bathing seems more up my alley. We'll see if the next chapter is the opposite for me then.

Oh, this is a lot of fun! And Daring Do's hurt wing thing, I can totally see that happening.

I loled.

A few errors here and there, basic grammar but stuff spell check misses;
"...but hurting the prisoner seemed to be a privilege of her skull.faced captor." - Just a missed hyphen here.

"However, with the situation being what it was, they all turned real into her imagination..." - Should be just "in" I think, but I really don't know if I'm not wrong on that.

Other than those few errors, I sometimes felt the word "pussy" could have replaced by something else. I don't know why but I felt as though it was out of place. Maybe I have been reading too many other authors and too many varying styles.

Overall, I really enjoyed the flow of this story and all those little details about the ... production?

[Edited because I don't think I covered how much I enjoyed this one] Next week you say? I can't wait for the chocolaty goodness. Though now that I say that I'm worried that Pinkie might show up.

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Thanks for the word notes and the praise!

I decided to censor a certain word for female genitalia, since I was uncertain of when to use it (yeah, despite this being porn). Pussy became the tamer alternative.

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Augh, some proof-reader I turned out to be to miss those!

Seriously, this is a really funny story; sure it sacrifices some of the ambiguity of the earlier stories, but the result is great.

this is..yes.

Two things ran through my mind

This one thought
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And this one....
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Gonna be honest... I got really turned on reading this. By the end, my heart was racing and my mouth was getting dry. You are a fantastic writer. Of course it helped that I was imagining that I was in Twilight's place, helping rainbow fulfill her fantasy. Didnt clop. Didnt need to. Bravo! Encore!

Quite enjoying this! I like the contrast between what's happening externally, and what's happening in RD's imagination.

Rainbow Dash wasn’t acting when she was writing in her bonds, whimpering and moaning.

I think this ought to have been "writhing".