Hey. Been a while since the last time, huh? Speaking of which, it might help to set up a blog with descriptions of the various members of the Hive, so we can reference that if we don't quite remember everything about them when reading a chapter. Personalities and physical traits, stuff like that. And the story does still need an editor, I think there's a group specifically for that you might ask for help in. Still, glad you're back and you're doing better.
As for the choices:
Given our current focus on transformation abilities, I'd say we should first work on memories about proper infiltration tactics and behaviour, about how to properly blend in with ponies and get love out of them without needing magic. I'd suggest Chrysalis's memories of her time as Cadance, but she did a rather poor job there actually, so perhaps there are better alternatives. Related to this, memories relevant to how to seduce ponies and how to have sex with them, it seems that's what we'll need to do soon enough. And just general knowledge of the Elements and Princesses and pony culture, that's also going to be helpful.
I'd say have the dogs focus on building tunnel to Canterlot, while expanding the Hive itself away from both it and Ponyville. Canterlot might be the most guarded of the two towns, but it's also far more easy to have someone slip in there without being noticed. No one would question a new face showing up in the capital, but someone new in Ponyville will immediately stand out. Definitely have the dogs do more digging for gold, that will be useful. Maybe already set up a structure for the Hive that makes it easier to defend in the event someone comes, with escape routes to leave, and with the Hive itself being deeper than the entrance part where the dogs would live as to make it less likely someone would be suspicious if they stumbled upon it.
I vote for P.O.V. shifts, and specifically:
I'd say go with Segmenta first. Zecora is both the most dangerous of the two targets and the most potentially rewarding if we manage to get her to fall for us.
I'm in favour of Viola's punishment being sex related, because of course I am, but I don't think it should be quite as extreme as what the other comment was proposing. We still need her as a valuable asset out there, after all, sex slave is a role for ponies to fill. I'd say just a regular session of sexually dominating her, to teach her her both that she should obey us first and foremost rather than act by herself and that obeying us feels better. We should try to be a leader that rewards good behavior rather than one that heavily punishes bad ones.
10588417 not if the sex pet is bound, blind, has to act like an animal, and can not speak any language in the physical world. also, the sex pet has to do anything that the queen wants no matter how humiliating it is.
Right finally got to read this, looks great so far, excited to see where this goes, and ready to help now that I've actually read it. 10588287 Makes the most sound assessment, the only additional bit I think is wise to state is a bit of emphasis on denial on our hot-headed dear in the punishment. After all, she does need an actual punishment, nothing violent, just keeping her bothered while she serves her sentence.
In the future I will do more, and offer a bit more insights, am a bit late after all.
10664036 No magitech like that in this world. Also the Princesses are both unaware of the problem and are as stated in my second chapter borderline xenophobic to other races, only willing to deal with them because they have the sun and moon as their bargaining tools. They only actively aid others once their society's collapse, then stepping in to provide aid and rebuild as they see fit. Basically their masters of the waiting game. While Luna does lead the armies during times of War that's always as a defensive measurement.
Violas punishment should be she should be a sex pet for her queen
Hey. Been a while since the last time, huh? Speaking of which, it might help to set up a blog with descriptions of the various members of the Hive, so we can reference that if we don't quite remember everything about them when reading a chapter. Personalities and physical traits, stuff like that. And the story does still need an editor, I think there's a group specifically for that you might ask for help in. Still, glad you're back and you're doing better.
As for the choices:
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Sex pet is a maybe, but for the queen would be more of a reward than a punishment.
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not if the sex pet is bound, blind, has to act like an animal, and can not speak any language in the physical world. also, the sex pet has to do anything that the queen wants no matter how humiliating it is.
have not read this.
do not intend to read this.
but you asked for a comment.
and i have a suggestion.
lesbianism.
that's all i got.
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POV shifts sounds like a winner.
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I'd say go with everything third wheel said.
Seen your post looking for comments. Great story so far!!!👍
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I've pretty much got to agree here.
Right finally got to read this, looks great so far, excited to see where this goes, and ready to help now that I've actually read it.
10588287
Makes the most sound assessment, the only additional bit I think is wise to state is a bit of emphasis on denial on our hot-headed dear in the punishment. After all, she does need an actual punishment, nothing violent, just keeping her bothered while she serves her sentence.
In the future I will do more, and offer a bit more insights, am a bit late after all.
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No magitech like that in this world.
Also the Princesses are both unaware of the problem and are as stated in my second chapter borderline xenophobic to other races, only willing to deal with them because they have the sun and moon as their bargaining tools.
They only actively aid others once their society's collapse, then stepping in to provide aid and rebuild as they see fit. Basically their masters of the waiting game. While Luna does lead the armies during times of War that's always as a defensive measurement.