Totally good, and we need more chapters, now twilight will learn the magic of romance, but her friends also need to learn too, specially the inexperience ones.
All well and good until Applejack kicks it down or Rarity shows that she's a master lock picker. Respect for privacy and/or knocking? I doubt it. Pinkie doesn't do well with personal space either. Be concerned if she want's to show off "balloon" tricks.
Maybe it was the sex talking. I mean, it had been a while. Maybe it was seeing a lot of her own fretting in me. How I was when I first got here. But there was a part of me that deeply cared for this little, crazy unicorn. And that part didnโt want to freak out.
I'm just glad that there's still some feeling in these characters, like they're not just mindless sex machines, good job
10633424 Exactly, I agree 1 hundred percent, some of the stuff I have seen here has been pretty disturbing, I wish I could I see, but this, is tolerable, as well as other stories that are tolerable as well
Will all the sex scenes involve Twilight?
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Not all of them. She'll be observing them of course, but she won't always participate.
I vote more chapters and more ponies
Was Spike more catatonic over Seeing Twilight in a make out session or that Shepard was naked
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Yes.
Very good for your first clop. If you make more ill read it.
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Totally good, and we need more chapters, now twilight will learn the magic of romance, but her friends also need to learn too, specially the inexperience ones.
All well and good until Applejack kicks it down or Rarity shows that she's a master lock picker. Respect for privacy and/or knocking? I doubt it. Pinkie doesn't do well with personal space either. Be concerned if she want's to show off "balloon" tricks.
Well, guess that's one surefire way to end a Twily-nanas episode.
"Twilight's having a panic attack! Quick, throw Shepard at her!"
Bloody hell, that was brilliant.
Most excellent.
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Why would a member of the Nudist Colony care about the Human being naked?
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becuause unlike most there his junk is out in plane sight.
Always lock the door!
Noted...
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This is perfect. I laughed and loved the clop scene. I really hope to read more soon.
If I may request Luna being the other Main Mare, if that is the direction the story takes?
Best Princess don't get no love anymore.
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She's on the list.
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With actual balloons? Or that shit from Simple Ways?
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Real balloons, see SPNATI
I'm just glad that there's still some feeling in these characters, like they're not just mindless sex machines, good job
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Exactly, I agree 1 hundred percent, some of the stuff I have seen here has been pretty disturbing, I wish I could I see, but this, is tolerable, as well as other stories that are tolerable as well