yeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssss! you update!!!! wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice chapter! Love, lust, and shanenngias (or whatever that spell)! Why do I have a feeling butterscoch if going to be the next to know (or maybe Dusk with those binoculars).
Nice to see Berry spice up the relationship. And Blitz is an exhibitionist, why am I not surprised? Good to see your writers block took a hike, I loved this series, but thought it would remain a trilogy for good!
I was just re-reading this story yesterday. This was so kinky. It was hot. On a lighter note, I wonder what costume Bubble Berry will make Blitz wear on Nightmare Night? I wonder how much longer before others find out about their relationship?
4021883 Agreed. My personal vision: Princess Blitz. Berry dresses him up in something girly knowing blitz secretly enjoys it a bit to much. AJ and Berry making passive comments about Blitz's costume as they know he's probably hard as a rock all night wearing something like satin panties under his costume. It's fortunate he's too small to be noticed as he has to walk around ponyville with in some frufru outfit with a boner.
I'm sure Tyrant has ideas of his own if he decides to write a Halloween chapter though
i1.ytimg.com/vi/1y3Bzg_0v_w/hqdefault.jpg All i say to writers block is that pic.....anyway great chapter i completly forgot about this story until i saw it on eqaf you know what it means if you go there so keep up the good work pal
Gotta say - absolutely love this little series you have going on.
Small dicked Rainbow is a pet-love of mine, but its not exactly well-represented. So seeing something this well written for it is just 100% perfection.
One thing i will say is that for a story built around the whole Itzy Blitzy thing, its not that focused on his size. Which is a little bit of a shame. Id love to see more humilation in general to be honest. Since the absolute hottest bits are where Berry is talking Blitz down. Maybe some more threesome stuff (its a shame Big macintosh is presumably female in this universe) with a well-sized stallion to compare with? Or cross-dressing.
Who knows. Whatever i suggest, im sure youll write even better. Cant wait for more!
4034919 Oh, I intend to have more. Its gotten more focused on Blitz and Berry's relationship (blame Jake the Army Guy for this being anything more than pure clop, the convincing bastard!) but trust me, next chapter will indulge in it. I do love pindick Blitzy, soooooo much. I wish there was more of it. And I love crossdressing, so there will definitely be that soon, although maybe not the next chapter. But oooooh yes. You, my good man or woman, are a person after my own heart. Well...maybe not heart, precisely, but a bit lower. Just as 4027585 is. Both of you, really, trust me, you'll like the next few chapters, and hopefully they won't take so long to come out.
4022678 Glad you liked it so much as to pictures. Truly, I feel blessed.
4022164 Just because I never mention it, doesn't mean he wasn't. Doesn't mean he was either. Ehehe.
4021356 So happy you like it so much! Nothing like two stallions going at is, is there?
I never imagined that Pinkie/Berry would be such a good dom. It was nice to switch it up and have Berry be on the receiving end. I can only imagine what Nightmare night is going to be like, oh celestia the possibilities.Great chapter hoof, I'm glad this story updated.
Dear tyrant, I have been reading this project of yours and I must say I have "enjoyed" your work... But I do wish you would also indulge in the romance and simple acts of normal life. Such as deliveries and things like that. One more thing that I really loved and want to see more of is the when Berry and blitz "reviled" their relation to AJ. That did put a wide grin on my face that lasted the whole night. But it goes without saying you are the author and make the decisions. I will read anything you put into it.
I've missed this story so much, it's super exciting for this to get a new chapter! Wonderful as always.
yeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssss! you update!!!! wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice chapter! Love, lust, and shanenngias (or whatever that spell)! Why do I have a feeling butterscoch if going to be the next to know (or maybe Dusk with those binoculars).
Next one please!!!!
Nice to see Berry spice up the relationship. And Blitz is an exhibitionist, why am I not surprised? Good to see your writers block took a hike, I loved this series, but thought it would remain a trilogy for good!
unf
i was waiting for 'scotch to be at the window wanting something, but that works too i guess
Holy shit, mirror pool orgy chapter please!
You could call it Bubble Berry's Bukkake Barrage.
Damn it's good to see this update! You haven't lost your touch with the sexy! I daresay you've even improved!
YEAH, thanks for another great chapter.
Brilliant chapter. The whole thing, just-
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I was just re-reading this story yesterday. This was so kinky. It was hot. On a lighter note, I wonder what costume Bubble Berry will make Blitz wear on Nightmare Night? I wonder how much longer before others find out about their relationship?
4021883 Agreed. My personal vision: Princess Blitz. Berry dresses him up in something girly knowing blitz secretly enjoys it a bit to much. AJ and Berry making passive comments about Blitz's costume as they know he's probably hard as a rock all night wearing something like satin panties under his costume. It's fortunate he's too small to be noticed as he has to walk around ponyville with in some frufru outfit with a boner.
I'm sure Tyrant has ideas of his own if he decides to write a Halloween chapter though
i1.ytimg.com/vi/1y3Bzg_0v_w/hqdefault.jpg All i say to writers block is that pic.....anyway great chapter i completly forgot about this story until i saw it on eqaf you know what it means if you go there so keep up the good work pal
Gotta say - absolutely love this little series you have going on.
Small dicked Rainbow is a pet-love of mine, but its not exactly well-represented. So seeing something this well written for it is just 100% perfection.
One thing i will say is that for a story built around the whole Itzy Blitzy thing, its not that focused on his size. Which is a little bit of a shame. Id love to see more humilation in general to be honest. Since the absolute hottest bits are where Berry is talking Blitz down. Maybe some more threesome stuff (its a shame Big macintosh is presumably female in this universe) with a well-sized stallion to compare with? Or cross-dressing.
Who knows. Whatever i suggest, im sure youll write even better. Cant wait for more!
Holy mother of all nom's, It's HERE!
wow... I'm late.
4034919 Oh, I intend to have more. Its gotten more focused on Blitz and Berry's relationship (blame Jake the Army Guy for this being anything more than pure clop, the convincing bastard!) but trust me, next chapter will indulge in it. I do love pindick Blitzy, soooooo much. I wish there was more of it. And I love crossdressing, so there will definitely be that soon, although maybe not the next chapter. But oooooh yes. You, my good man or woman, are a person after my own heart. Well...maybe not heart, precisely, but a bit lower. Just as 4027585 is. Both of you, really, trust me, you'll like the next few chapters, and hopefully they won't take so long to come out.
4022678 Glad you liked it so much as to pictures. Truly, I feel blessed.
4022164 Just because I never mention it, doesn't mean he wasn't. Doesn't mean he was either. Ehehe.
4021356 So happy you like it so much! Nothing like two stallions going at is, is there?
4049792 you are right
I never imagined that Pinkie/Berry would be such a good dom. It was nice to switch it up and have Berry be on the receiving end. I can only imagine what Nightmare night is going to be like, oh celestia the possibilities.Great chapter hoof, I'm glad this story updated.
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MOAR BLITZY!
Dear tyrant,
I have been reading this project of yours and I must say I have "enjoyed" your work... But I do wish you would also indulge in the romance and simple acts of normal life. Such as deliveries and things like that. One more thing that I really loved and want to see more of is the when Berry and blitz "reviled" their relation to AJ. That did put a wide grin on my face that lasted the whole night. But it goes without saying you are the author and make the decisions. I will read anything you put into it.
(To be honest this is the first clip fic I've red outside of greentexts(so I don't really have much of a standard to compare against)
I like it so far it's cute, hot, no mistakes I can see really well written and has a good amount of humor :3