This chapter was like the five stages of grief but written in a marvelous way.

Doing this all for your sister.. I can respect that John.

You... Really need an editor for this story, the grammar and syntax are all over the place

10871186
I have an editor, but the old chapters aren't edited. The chapters that have a "E" at the end have been edited.

Yep I had forgotten the girl.

I slowly nodded, listening to the instruction that it gave me and took a deep breath. My eyes widened at the sight of seeing strands of energy in every color slowly part from the miniature rainbow sun and reach towards me softly and elegantly. I cannot fathom why I put so much trusted the GAME, many times more faith did I put in it than any goody two shoe contractor I have ever met before, perhaps it was desperation or even manipulation of my thoughts, but I could care less. I took a few steps forward to close the distance of the holographic vines and watched in awe as the slowly entangled me, not restrain me, but to simply gain a grip of my form. It wasn't like strings or spider webs that tangled themselves on me, it felt more like rays of sunlight, soothingly warming my skin. Some of the light limbs touched my chest and sunk into it, a fuzzy and warm feeling began to grow, taking away all previous worry as I witnessed the orb slowly gravitate towards me and eventually, phase into my chest.

So much trust

holographic vines and watched in awe as the GAME slowly entangled me,

11832946
One day, one day I'll come around to fixing the first few chapters in their entirety. Also, thanks for pointing that error out to me.