When your only means of communicating are through letters across the world through two major wars, long-distance relationships are tough. Especially when it's for ten years. But as the fire consumes the world, they also are the only way to go on.
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great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Hot dang, I absolutely LOVED this chapter! I went into this whole trial expecting doom and gloom, but instead got something reinvigorating (and awesome!). The reformistan may be a bit zealous but their nobles actually seem noble, especially compared to reich. I see more issues arising with these two different command structures in the future. I also want to see more of these stories the papers are making about our boy Cyril, I think it would be fun to see how exaggerated they are. I eagerly await the next installment, keep up the amazing work.
i dont blame Heimclar for the reaction to Van Zieks comment
while not wise, it does make sense from someone who feels the grief of those they love dead, and now the one who's responsible to some degree insulting others u love.
also Zugravescu is a fking badass.
oh god...i said the badass part BEFORE he said who he was. damn. even more impressed now
and now the medals part. can i apply for Reformisten xD
its..odd to see how you've turned the Reformisten from the near propogandist authoritarian nightmare, into something that is....mixed. sure theres still alot of suspicion over how...free are they there. And some questionable actions. And yet all of it is more than made up for by the honor and professionalism. Not to mention results.
Also is this the start of the dismantling of power of the nobility? if game had an event like this it would be memorable indeed!
Ostheer defenitly rose in respect in my eyes
i wonder how paige will react to this...her view of the Reformisten is lacking these...direct views. And it might be hard for her to accept Cyril's perspective without her own. But its looking like he'll be with them from now on.
I just remembered Cyril's sister went to Bronzehill and there's a Reformistein youth program there, I hope she doesn't come home as a fanatic.
This Trial duology is just so good. I'm not sure why but these two chapters are just something I really like. It does have moments of telling rather than showing but I can overlook that as Cyril's mental notes.